fic: there's something funny in the air.
there's something funny in the air
(i can feel it like i can feel your laugh)
eminem/david friendship, david/david pre-slash ; pg13 ; ~4000
"There's a new guy in the class," is the first thing David says, and he says it in a rush, like he's been dying to say it all period. (unbeta'd! please forgive any errors ( Read more... )
(i can feel it like i can feel your laugh)
eminem/david friendship, david/david pre-slash ; pg13 ; ~4000
"There's a new guy in the class," is the first thing David says, and he says it in a rush, like he's been dying to say it all period. (unbeta'd! please forgive any errors ( Read more... )
OKAY I HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS ABOUT THIS.
I love how you transitioned everything to AU HS times.
I love how the friendship is established, how it comes FIRST.
I LOVE THEIR PLAYFUL BACK AND FORTH. HOW THEY KNOW EACH OTHER SO WELL.
I love how Cook's a DOOFUS and cheating at thumb wrestling.
I LOVE THAT COOK'S FRIENDS ARE ANDY AND NEAL.
I love how Marshall was worried that the whole friend of a friend of a friend thing was about him LOLZ. SORRY, NO MAKING OUT BETWEEN YOU GUYS.
I KIND OF LIKE HOW MARSHALL IS A RIDIC HUGE SOFTIE IN THIS. IS IT ONLY WHEN IT COMES TO DAVID? IS HE JUST A MORE NONANGRYATTHEWORLD SORTA GUY IN HS? DOES DAVID'S SMILE MAKE THINGS A LITTLE LESS RAGEY?
Also.
--M&M
I SEE THE PERFECTION.
Also. That entire last bit?
And Marshall invites him in, feeds him butter-free popcorn, and they sit on the couch, facing each other, and David tells him all about it.
It's like girltalk but replace the girls with DA and Eminem. YEAH.
OMGAH. WHAT STARTED OUT AS PAITAC BEING A RIDIC CRAZY PROMPTER HAS LEAD TO THE MOST AMAZING FRIENDSHIP SINCE BERT AND ERNIE. BUT WITH LESS STRIPES. AND...PUPPETS.
EMINEM/ARCHIE CAN CONTINUE FOR YOUR ENTIRE BINGO CARD.
A small suggestion to be taken as lightly or as seriously as you wish.
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also: i hope the heightened emotions are a good thing? at least, most of the time? lmk if there's anything i can do, alright?
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I love how the friendship is established, how it comes FIRST.
at first i was totally gonna have it be that marshall was the new kid at school, and david befriends him, but i switched it for cook. because i like the idea of them being established, like you said. I FIND THEIR FRIENDSHIP SO ADORABLE NOW. AND THEY AREN'T EVEN FRIENDS IN REAL LIFE. D:
I love how Marshall was worried that the whole friend of a friend of a friend thing was about him LOLZ. SORRY, NO MAKING OUT BETWEEN YOU GUYS.
LOLOLOL. i was writing the whole david-leaning-in-and-marshall-freaking-out scene thinking, lollllll I HOPE MELODY IS FREAKING OUT THINKING THEY'RE GOING TO KISS. no lie. NO LIE. wrote this whole thing with you in mind, just saying~
I KIND OF LIKE HOW MARSHALL IS A RIDIC HUGE SOFTIE IN THIS. IS IT ONLY WHEN IT COMES TO DAVID? IS HE JUST A MORE NONANGRYATTHEWORLD SORTA GUY IN HS? DOES DAVID'S SMILE MAKE THINGS A LITTLE LESS RAGEY?
...ALL OF THE ABOVE? HAHA. david brings out a different side of him.
OMGAH. WHAT STARTED OUT AS paitac BEING A RIDIC CRAZY PROMPTER HAS LEAD TO THE MOST AMAZING FRIENDSHIP SINCE BERT AND ERNIE. BUT WITH LESS STRIPES. AND...PUPPETS.
ALL HAIL PAITAC. SHE IS ESSENTIALLY THE GENIUS BEHIND THIS.
AND LOLZZZ AT BERT AND ERNIE. oh man. random: did you hear that bert and ernie now aren't allowed to live in the same house and share baths/give each other baths, because there was a "gay" connotation to it, and parents started complaining about it? DDDDD:
A small suggestion to be taken as lightly or as seriously as you wish.
totally thinking about writing more of this, asgihasl;kfd. IT IS SO MUCH FUN WRITING EMINEM/DAVID FRIENDSHIP FIC. you should try it, seriously. it's amazing. you'd write famazing fic of them.
HEARTS ALL OVER THE WORLD TONIGHT. ♥♥♥
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at first i was totally gonna have it be that marshall was the new kid at school, and david befriends him
A+ MOVE JESSICA. I love that we don't know how they exactly became friends, what made it work between them to know each other so well even though they are realistically as different as two people can be. (Realistically...in fiction? IDK.)
AND THEY AREN'T EVEN FRIENDS IN REAL LIFE. D:
I would love this more than I love Taco Bell.
lollllll I HOPE MELODY IS FREAKING OUT THINKING THEY'RE GOING TO KISS. no lie. NO LIE. wrote this whole thing with you in mind, just saying~
I WAS VERY CONCERNED NEGL. BUT I WAS LIKE...no jessica told me she wouldn't.
...or would she!! D:
OMG WTF AT THAT BERT AND ERNIE THING THOUGH. OPEN UP THE FRONT DOOR AND STAND THE HECK UP. THAT IS RIDICULOUS. MY GOD. IT'S SESAME STREET. D: THAT BLOWS. I am sad for the children of our future.
IT IS SO MUCH FUN WRITING EMINEM/DAVID FRIENDSHIP FIC. you should try it, seriously. it's amazing. you'd write famazing fic of them.
HOW WOULD I EVEN BEGIN TO DO THIS. IT WOULD BE IMPOSS. I will leave this in your and just capslock fail when the time is right. Good? Good.
Also! My emotions are just all heightened - excitement, nerves, happiness, stress - LOLZ IT'S LIKE I'M FEELING MY EVERYDAY FEELINGS BUT EVERYTHING IS MAXED TO THE 29384934TH POWER. I'm good though. :D TY.
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