In Between Days

[kiss_me_cait23]

Rating: R
Pairing: Naruto/hand (detailed description of SasuSaku, implications of SasuNaruSaku)
Summary: I know I was wrong when I said it was true--that it couldn't be me and be her in between without you.
Warnings: shota/loli--specifically, a fourteen-year-old masturbating to thoughts of two thirteen-year-olds petting heavily.
A/N: just a glimpse at

Comments

[askerian]

That was both super hot and really sad. ;___;

The weird thing was that the thought of Sasuke baring his throat, letting Sakura mark his skin where everyone could see it, was just about the sexiest thing Naruto had ever imagined.
Nghyes. *_*

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thank you so much!!! I have terrible love for depressed Naruto, but now I need to write him some fluff or something. Thanks for reading, so glad you enjoyed it!

[potatoesrock]

I really liked it, it was very sexy, and at the same time quite sad for poor Naruto :( Plus, the sole idea of an inner-voice denying him Sakura's love even in a fantasy, is cruel. - even if it does make a great fantasy at the end, to think that Naruto, who's in love with Sakura, cannot even have a little fantasy of him and her in peace without feeling guilty, is cruel ^^'' -

It was really good ^^

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thanks. <3 I think I just like torturing the poor boy. This could actually have been a lot longer and lot more depressing, but I lost patience with it. I'll probably write them some fluff next.

[beyondthemoor]

Oooh, I love Team Seven fic! *^_^*

This was so very intense -- the feelings, the emotions, the way you evoke the desperation (physically and emotionally), and how fervently Naruto feels in that he wants to get Team Seven back together.

Thank you so much for sharing!

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

I'm so glad I got all of that across. I love the Team 7 dynamics, so I had a lot of fun with this one. Glad you liked it!

[ivy_tsuta]

Nngh. ♥
That was so much emotion all packed together in one moment. So sexy and so sad.

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thanks so much! Really glad you enjoyed it.

[rot_chan]

This was so well done...combining angst and sex without it being overdone or unrealistic can be sometimes hard to do, but you executed it flawlessly. I loved the way Naruto's fantasy was about Sasuke and Sakura instead of himself with Sakura. Very neat Team 7 romance interpretation! Good job =)

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thank you so much! I love writing angsty smut, so I'm glad it worked for you. And this is one of my favorite headcanon theories, so it was fun to write out.