[fic] Our Own Brand of Paradise - Chapter 7 Part A

[kirakiraayumi]

Title: Our Own Brand of Paradise
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, YooSuMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, fluff, Changmin with food (come on, that's totally dangerous. XD)
A/N: Finally, the beginning of the final chapter! (Happy Thanksgiving~)
Summary: JaeChunSu are busy in LA. Yunho and Changmin are busy preparing for the SMTown concerts among other

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[your_lollidella]

I will come back and read this when I have time later :)
♥ so happy to see you updated!
&& happy thanksgiving!~

[your_lollidella]

OH MY GOSH.
It's so... so sweet I really like the communication you make with the 5...and I can't believe this story is almost finish.
I seriously cant wait for the next part...oh my gosh oh my gosh omg. lol
and total LOL at OT5 HAHA but we all know Yun wouldn't REALLY share Jae. HAHA~~

Thanks for the lovely update my dear!

[kirakiraayumi]

SORRY I'M SO LAAAATE D: I waited to reply to comments till you replied because I like your comments and then I totally never replied D: ♥♥♥♥♥♥

And I'm slow. ><; I might just post what I have now. Which is like NOTHING. Grr. Sorry~~~

I'm glad I'm getting people who say Yunho won't share Jae. XD I was getting the impression that people wanted the ot5, and tried to extend the scene, and it just died. >>;

I'll try to hurry and update some~ ♥♥♥

Happy holidays! Happy new year! ♥♥♥

[kirakiraayumi]

Thank you so much for commenting~

Hopefully they can all make it through okay. :) I'll try to update soon! ♥

Happy Holidays~ Happy New year! :D

[bexy31]

I totally thought that was gonna turn into OT5, ha ha XD They should definitely try it with Jaejoong again ^w^ With Yunho on webcam ^w^ Yum~

It's so sad that they have to leave soon T____T

Can't wait for the next chapter :3

[kirakiraayumi]

Hmm... side-fic one-shot? ^-^ Maybe. XD

I know, right? Maybe they'll never leave. Maybe Jae should pull chains from somewhere and - wait, those would probably belong to Junsu. ^^;

I'll try to update soon! Sorry for the wait~~~~

Happy Holidays! Happy New Year!

[n3uromanc3r]

I thought it will be an orgy with all five of them on Jae's bed after they realized that they still have 6 hours, so now I'm a little bit disappointed, but just a little, because I really enjoyed both the YunJae both the YooSuMin moments during/after breakfast...

I'm afraid of the parting-scene, but I'm too curious so I hope you'll update soon!

[kirakiraayumi]

Haha, I tried to extend the scene out, we'll see what happens. :)

I'll try to update soon! I"m soooooo sorry for the long wait. My muses are refusing to kick in. I'm afraid to put out something that isn't good quality. T_T

Happy Holidays! Happy New Year!

[waterlily8672]

OMO! You updated! YAY!^^

You had me there for a second with this pseudo-orgy!! Damn! Kinky~~^^