[fic] Our Own Brand of Paradise - Chapter 7 Part A

[kirakiraayumi]

Title: Our Own Brand of Paradise
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, YooSuMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, fluff, Changmin with food (come on, that's totally dangerous. XD)
A/N: Finally, the beginning of the final chapter! (Happy Thanksgiving~)
Summary: JaeChunSu are busy in LA. Yunho and Changmin are busy preparing for the SMTown concerts among other

Comments

[hitomi2oo7]

OMG~~! The way Chun and Min "harassed" Jae Oppa was so wrong yet so hot ~faints~ x__x
Still I think Yunho Oppa would never let them go all the way with his booJae kekekeke
And somehow it makes me relieved xD
This was EPIC like always~~!
Thank you for all your hard work bb~~! *huggles*

[kokoromiya7]

Omo, how could Yunho let Changmin kiss Jae ? T_T please no OT5, it's already weird enough for me to read YooSumin going at it like horny rabbits so I don't want them to drag YunJae in their perverted games XD Seriously, YunJae are much hotter when it's just the 2 of them. I like it when they are exclusive and possessive with each other and I don't think they are the type to share (well, at least I don't want them to be lol).
So sad that Yunho and Changmin are leaving :(
I'm sorry I didn't comment on all the previous chapters but I have to revise for my exams. To be honest, I shouldn't even be on lj reading fanfics in the first place ^^" YunJae are such a distraction :S
Ok, I really should work NOW !! X)

[roughmetal2]

This is an emotional moment for the yoominsu but I can't help but laugh at changmin's words: "I’d spend forever with you if I could. The best thing is forever in bed. Maybe with food eternally appearing on a tray on the side." aaah, food and the maknae will always go together XD.

love the camaraderie of those five though i feel crushed that they have to be apart once again :(