Comments | kiraboshi: fic: supernatural // these crimes of illusion, chapter 2.9 [R, Gen, Pre-Series]

kiraboshi

fic: supernatural // these crimes of illusion, chapter 2.9 [R, Gen, Pre-Series]

Jul 27, 2006 09:59

Wow. Finishing a fic is emotional, but finishing posting a fic is even more. It's final, complete, and out there for the world to see and read and judge as they see fit.

Author's Notes to follow the chapter. Here it is, kids -- this ride's coming to an end...

...for now.

Title: These Crimes of Illusion
Rating: R
Genre: Pre-Series, Gen
Summary: ( Read more... )

fic:spn:illusion, fic: supernatural

Comments 63

scout27 July 27 2006, 15:43:02 UTC

“That’s my job,” Dean smiles. “Now, give me the keys. I’m driving.”

Best possible ending of any story...EVER.
You know how I feel about this...the moral dilemma's, the depth with which you've captured the characters and the relationships, and the story arc itself. It's a work of art, and I love it. I'm sad to see it come to an end too, but the sequel already has me engrossed so I shant complain.

And thank you for your kind words my friend *hugs*
You are the same to me!

janissa11 July 27 2006, 15:48:54 UTC

Oh, well-done, darlin! A terrific ending to a tremendous story. Congratulations!!

kiraboshi August 1 2006, 13:29:00 UTC

Thanks! That makes me feel better, because I was afraid the ending would flop, and all this build-up would have been for nothing. Seriously. I was agonizing for DAYS before I finally posted.

apieceofcake July 27 2006, 16:09:28 UTC

Oh hon, I'm so sad that this parts over and they are even more fucked than they were before... My heart breaks for them.

Thank you for a wonderful read :-)

Jo
xx

ps I'm feeling wicked 'cause I enjoyed Dean finally punching John..he was right he did deserve it.

kiraboshi August 1 2006, 13:29:31 UTC

Thanks for reading!

*laughs* I KNEW people would love that final punch. I giggled when I wrote it.

koyote19 July 27 2006, 16:21:55 UTC

Thanks for the kind words. I'm flattered to have been any help at all on this story, and to be honest, I am actually prouder of this piece than I am any of my own work.

It's a fantastic story, babe. Never doubt it.

iamstealthyone July 27 2006, 16:41:53 UTC

Crap, it’s over already? This is the last part? Really?

*blinks and looks again*

Huh. I guess so.

*comforts self with thought of a sequel*

I like how this final section unfolded, that everything didn’t come together in an instant: Dean can see, and John wuvs him and they’ll be OK, albeit a bit angst-ridden for a while. No, you had both Winchesters endure a little more danger and worry before Dean got a several-strings-attached resolution, and I’m very much intrigued by Dean’s agreement with the Queen.

Favorite lines:

He feels Dean’s presence as only a parent can, strong and vibrating at his side, before he says a word.

Love the sixth sense there that John has for Dean’s presence.

“I killed him and they couldn’t see it,” Dean chokes out. “Fuck, I did it and nothing changed.”

Oh, holy crap. Not fair! He did what they wanted! *hugs Dean*

“No, son,” John says, “just you.”

Ouch. True, but still … ouch.

Dean nods, sways, and falls forward into his father’s arms. The sky opens up with a blast of thunder and releases enough ( ... )

kiraboshi August 1 2006, 13:30:35 UTC

It’s like he’s assuming a more mature role in his relationship with his father, and becoming more of the Dean we see in season one: in charge and with an edge and oh so very yummy.

Awesome! I wanted this story to match up with the beginning of the season, to give some explination to why Dean and John are they way they are.