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Kink Me! #1

Mar 26, 2009 20:00

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anonymous March 26 2009, 22:24:20 UTC

Arthur/Merlin, vulnerable!Arthur

Part 1 anonymous March 29 2009, 23:14:04 UTC

Arthur’s spread out beneath him on the bed, tense and trembling, panting in quick, desperate, vowel-laced gasps. Candlelight glints on the pale hairs of his thighs and chest, the darker hair at his crotch. Merlin leans down and kisses his navel, lets his lips follow the soft line of hair over his belly downward, smiling as the muscles jump beneath his tongue. Arthur squirms, tugs at the restraints that bind his arms to the bedposts, spreads his legs wider, cants his hips to try to urge Merlin’s mouth closer to where he wants it.

Arthur’s cock is right there; Merlin could lick the shiny tip if he just stuck out his tongue. Instead he places his hands on Arthur’s hipbones and holds him in place while he carefully licks up the pearlescent drops that have leaked onto Arthur’s skin.

“You’re being very messy,” he chides, between licks.

“Your job -” Arthur pants. “Clean up - my messes - Merlin, please“Did I hear you say ’please’, Arthur?” Merlin grins up at him, admiring the flush that travels up Arthur’s torso and pinks his cheeks. “ ( ... )

Re: Part 1 b_mouse October 21 2009, 05:04:05 UTC

Part 2

Part 2 anonymous March 29 2009, 23:15:21 UTC

He pulls away, ignoring Arthur’s unhappy whine, fumbles open the vial of oil and slicks his fingers. He pushes them inside Arthur’s body, trying not to hurt while at the same time being as quick about it as he can. Arthur feels so good around his fingers, but Merlin’s full of eagerness himself now, and unable to wait any longer.

He shifts back onto his knees, has to close his eyes as he slicks his cock, for if he sees Arthur lying there bound and hard and oiled and open for him, he’ll never be able to last long enough.

He moves forward, slides the tip of his cock along Arthur’s crack, pausing at his hole and pushing just enough to feel Arthur yielding around him, before drawing back.

“Merlin,” Arthur whispers, almost soundlessly. “Merlin. Please“Shhh. It’s all right,” Merlin’s thumb strokes Arthur’s cheekbone, rubs over his swollen lips. “I’m here. Feel me?” He rolls his hips forward, sinking in and Arthur gasps. Merlin stares at his open mouth, can’t help diving down for a kiss as he pushes in the rest of the way, all the way, as ( ... )

Re: Part 2 b_mouse October 21 2009, 05:04:30 UTC

Part 3

Part 3 anonymous March 29 2009, 23:16:30 UTC

Merlin lets go, lets himself fall. He clutches Arthur to him, curves down over him, wants to bury himself in Arthur’s body, melt into him until they disappear into one another. He cries Arthur’s name in a voice that sounds far away, spends in sweet, aching pulses, driving into him helplessly, mercilessly. It’s frighteningly powerful, cascades of blissful energy rippling through Merlin’s body, growing in power until they crest in a burst so intense he shakes with the force of it ( ... )

Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 03:38:11 UTC

WOW, that is the closest a fic has ever made me come to orgasm.

Excellent job!

Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 06:01:28 UTC

Fantastically hot!

Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 15:13:47 UTC

Wow. This is amazing. I especially love the last two paragraphs, the image they create. Lovely.

Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 23:54:59 UTC

This is amazing. I love it when Arthur is vulnerable with Merlin and this is just perfect. The sex is utterly fantastic but it's the emotion behind it that really grabs you. Wonderful job!

Re: Part 3 mossylawn March 31 2009, 20:29:46 UTC

fabulous, and oh the ending just broke me. ina good way.

Re: Part 3 anonymous April 1 2009, 08:20:38 UTC

You should win a medal. This is so well-written and so perfect. You've found new, beautiful turns of phrase, and I appreciate that so much.

Re: Part 3 lizardspots April 2 2009, 13:13:44 UTC

Oh my god, oh my god, that was AMAZING. You have a wonderful way with words, your turns of phrase were rich and delicious and heart breaking all at once. Gorgeously sexy, I loved it. And vulnerable!Arthur, oh man. ♥♥♥

Re: Part 3 anonymous April 3 2009, 14:59:02 UTC

Both hot and beautiful. Well done!

Re: Part 3 rain_polish April 11 2009, 04:56:10 UTC

This is one of the sexiest, deliciously filthy fics I have ever read. Good God, how can something like this exist? I sware, from begining to end, every detail, every part, had me incredibly turned on (sorry if that's TMI), and I love it. You got the heat, the energy, the need, the pure want perfectly. Love that Arthur is restrained, Merlin is in control and trying to make Arthur ask for it (mmm dirty talk!), and that Merlin is topping. The orgasms were very intense especially. Arthur's angry cock, mmm. Thank you for writing, and sharing! :D

Re: Part 3 rain_polish April 11 2009, 04:59:25 UTC

Ugh, the hotness of the sex made me forget to mention another important part- the end with Merlin seeing Arthur in such a vulnerable state, and the whole aspect of trust between one another. Beautiful relationship. ~

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