Kink Me! #1

Mar 26, 2009 20:00


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Part 3 anonymous March 29 2009, 23:16:30 UTC
Merlin lets go, lets himself fall. He clutches Arthur to him, curves down over him, wants to bury himself in Arthur’s body, melt into him until they disappear into one another. He cries Arthur’s name in a voice that sounds far away, spends in sweet, aching pulses, driving into him helplessly, mercilessly. It’s frighteningly powerful, cascades of blissful energy rippling through Merlin’s body, growing in power until they crest in a burst so intense he shakes with the force of it.

He collapses onto Arthur’s heaving, sweaty chest, presses his face into his shoulder. With a thought, Merlin unties the bindings around Arthur’s wrists, then he starts, realizing too late that he shouldn’t have done that. Fortunately, Arthur is still basking in the residual pleasure, eyes closed, limbs relaxed, shivering every minute or so. He looks debauched and painfully beautiful and so very vulnerable. Merlin wonders if Arthur has let anyone else see him so unguarded - if he would allow Merlin to see him like this if he had any idea how he looked. Somehow, he doesn’t think so.

When he meets Arthur’s eyes, he finds him watching, his expression soft and open. He smiles lazily at Merlin and in that moment he’s not the crown prince of Camelot, a man bound by duty and obligation, with the weight of destiny already heavy upon his shoulders. He’s just Arthur, and he’s everything that Merlin wants.

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Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 03:38:11 UTC
WOW, that is the closest a fic has ever made me come to orgasm.

Excellent job!

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Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 06:01:28 UTC
Fantastically hot!

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Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 15:13:47 UTC
Wow. This is amazing. I especially love the last two paragraphs, the image they create. Lovely.

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Re: Part 3 anonymous March 30 2009, 23:54:59 UTC
This is amazing. I love it when Arthur is vulnerable with Merlin and this is just perfect. The sex is utterly fantastic but it's the emotion behind it that really grabs you. Wonderful job!

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Re: Part 3 mossylawn March 31 2009, 20:29:46 UTC
fabulous, and oh the ending just broke me. ina good way.

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Re: Part 3 anonymous April 1 2009, 08:20:38 UTC
You should win a medal. This is so well-written and so perfect. You've found new, beautiful turns of phrase, and I appreciate that so much.

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Re: Part 3 lizardspots April 2 2009, 13:13:44 UTC
Oh my god, oh my god, that was AMAZING. You have a wonderful way with words, your turns of phrase were rich and delicious and heart breaking all at once. Gorgeously sexy, I loved it. And vulnerable!Arthur, oh man. ♥♥♥

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Re: Part 3 anonymous April 3 2009, 14:59:02 UTC
Both hot and beautiful. Well done!

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Re: Part 3 rain_polish April 11 2009, 04:56:10 UTC
This is one of the sexiest, deliciously filthy fics I have ever read. Good God, how can something like this exist? I sware, from begining to end, every detail, every part, had me incredibly turned on (sorry if that's TMI), and I love it. You got the heat, the energy, the need, the pure want perfectly. Love that Arthur is restrained, Merlin is in control and trying to make Arthur ask for it (mmm dirty talk!), and that Merlin is topping. The orgasms were very intense especially. Arthur's angry cock, mmm. Thank you for writing, and sharing! :D

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Re: Part 3 rain_polish April 11 2009, 04:59:25 UTC
Ugh, the hotness of the sex made me forget to mention another important part- the end with Merlin seeing Arthur in such a vulnerable state, and the whole aspect of trust between one another. Beautiful relationship. ~

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Re: Part 3 brunettepet June 24 2010, 16:39:58 UTC
This is gorgeous. Merlin using magic to caress and then unbind Arthur show how lost Arthur is in the pleasure.

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