Day Ten: Life on Either Side

[peri_peteia]

Title: Life on Either Side
Rating: PG-13.

For: cobaltink

I. Introduction

Mai is very small, and her mother tells her that she will make a new friend. This friend will be the most important friend she will ever make, and Mai must be good and quiet and do whatever she is told. The walls of the palace loom, and Mai girds herself for an unpleasant task.

Comments

[jill_rg]

Great, every part of it, but my favorite has to be this:

I just needed to know that you-"

"I'm with you," she finishes, and there is nothing else to say.

"Don't worry. You're going to make it up to me." I've often thought of that happening... that way...

[peri_peteia]

Thaaanks.

That was my favourite bit too. <3

[monalisaofpasta]

Oh I adore this, the different scenes, you capture the feeling very well. Very nicely done!

[peri_peteia]

Thank you!

lol off-topic

[peri_peteia]

Omg. SASHA. <3

P.S.

[peri_peteia]

I am soooo glad that you liked it!

I have been in the middle of a omgdonotwant bad writing spell for a while, so I sweated a lot trying to get something that I HOPED you would enjoy.

*sigh of relief*

[jumelles_mach6]

i love part iv and part ii! part ii was heartbreaking and sweet.

[peri_peteia]

Thank you!

[ali_wildgoose]

<3

More later.

For now, <3 <3 <3 <3

[peri_peteia]

WHERE IS MY MOAR, BITCH?