Our last goodbye(KaiXUruha, oneshot)

Dec 02, 2006 21:47


Title: Our last goodbye
Author: Mizuki(me)
Theme: III.16 spirited away
Claim: Kai x Uruha
Pairing(s): Kai x Uruha (Not clear mentions of seme and uke.)
Genre: angst
Ratings:PG(?)
Warnings: It’s kinda angsty/sad. Not beta-readed and English is not my first language, so there can be a few grammatica errors>>;
Written for the challenge comm 4seasons_rabu
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uruhaxkai, theme fic, fanfic, oneshot, gazette

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yueshi December 2 2006, 20:53:27 UTC
*snif*
today seems to be a bad day for kai *thinks of her own ff*

probably we shouldn't be writing fics when being in a bad mood...

but I liked it, I really do. But.. saaaaad!

another question, is this community locked or can anyone read the ffs? and could you give me the link to this com? preee~~ase??

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kikai_no_yume December 2 2006, 21:33:55 UTC
*hugs* yeah seems so-__-; we make Kai's days bad>>;

I'm glad you liked it^^ thanks for commenting!~^^

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yueshi December 3 2006, 06:47:24 UTC
but, at least we didn't let him kill himself...
^__^

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misscali90 December 2 2006, 21:17:28 UTC
Beautiful :) I love your writing style :)

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kikai_no_yume December 2 2006, 21:33:04 UTC
thank you~^^ I'm glad you like it=3 *huggles*

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elffingqueen December 2 2006, 21:36:05 UTC
You know what? I don't usually read fics of real life people, because I can't stop thinking about that it's a little ridiculous to write about people who have their own lives.. possible girlfriends.. BUT. Gladly, I can tell you, that this time.. Oh, what the heck, I loved this~! ^___^ I am a sodding fangirl, after all, and those two would make an awesome couple<3

Your way to write is beautiful, very romantic. The story drifts softly from the beginning, and the ending is quite surprising, which is great. The goodbye letter is giving this fic a nice, wistful edge. Okay, there are a couple of mistakes, but hey, English isn't my native language either, so.. ^^

All in all, you fulfilled the theme perfectly, thank you for sharing! I definitely want to see more of your writings~ Keep up the good job *huggles*

*saves into memories*

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kikai_no_yume December 2 2006, 21:58:50 UTC
Thanks~
I'm really glad you like it^^
It's nice to know that even a non-fanficfan likes my fanfics too^^

thanks, I will^^ (24 more themed oneshots comming up^^)
I'm really looking forwards to my break, I tend to write a lot during breaks^^

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kikai_no_yume December 3 2006, 09:01:54 UTC
*hugs*
Because I was sad and not happy when i wrote it??^^;
Thanks for commenting^^

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juusuikan December 3 2006, 01:58:20 UTC
*_*
Oh my.. such a sad sweet story!

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kikai_no_yume December 3 2006, 09:04:23 UTC
thank you~^^
I'm glad you like it=3
I am really happy it turned out the way I wanted^^

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