Title: Our last goodbye
Author: Mizuki(me)
Theme: III.16 spirited away
Claim: Kai x Uruha
Pairing(s): Kai x Uruha (Not clear mentions of seme and uke.)
Genre: angst
Ratings:PG(?)
Warnings: It’s kinda angsty/sad. Not beta-readed and English is not my first language, so there can be a few grammatica errors>>;
Written for the challenge comm 4seasons_rabu
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today seems to be a bad day for kai *thinks of her own ff*
probably we shouldn't be writing fics when being in a bad mood...
but I liked it, I really do. But.. saaaaad!
another question, is this community locked or can anyone read the ffs? and could you give me the link to this com? preee~~ase??
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I'm glad you liked it^^ thanks for commenting!~^^
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^__^
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Your way to write is beautiful, very romantic. The story drifts softly from the beginning, and the ending is quite surprising, which is great. The goodbye letter is giving this fic a nice, wistful edge. Okay, there are a couple of mistakes, but hey, English isn't my native language either, so.. ^^
All in all, you fulfilled the theme perfectly, thank you for sharing! I definitely want to see more of your writings~ Keep up the good job *huggles*
*saves into memories*
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I'm really glad you like it^^
It's nice to know that even a non-fanficfan likes my fanfics too^^
thanks, I will^^ (24 more themed oneshots comming up^^)
I'm really looking forwards to my break, I tend to write a lot during breaks^^
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Because I was sad and not happy when i wrote it??^^;
Thanks for commenting^^
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Oh my.. such a sad sweet story!
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I'm glad you like it=3
I am really happy it turned out the way I wanted^^
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