I sat down tonight and wrote the entirety of Chapter 5. In an hour. 2 pages, good flow, needs a brief edit, fits perfectly with Chapters 1, 2 and 3...
...and not with 4. At all.
In fact, I really don't like 4. I think it needs a massive overhaul. (ARRRGH transition chapters!! X( )
Massive rewriting ahead, I see... expect chapter 5 sometime this week
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