Evening Hour (nineteenth in the HOUR series)

[kidsnurse]

Title: Evening Hour
Characters: House, Wilson
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 1100 
Summary: Wilson thinks he's doing fine; House knows better.

The previous vignettes, in order, are: Visiting Hour,  Happy Hour,  Midnight Hour,  Fifty-Minute Hour,  Random Hour,  Painful Hour,  Dark Hour ,  Desperate Hour,  Witching Hour ,  Lonely Hour,  Dinner

Comments

[genagirl]

I think this is my fave of all the hours so far. Wilson needed to do that and House being so quiet and watching and then the beautiful ending. Yeah, that was amazing.

[kidsnurse]

I think this is my fave of all the hours so far.

it might be mine as well--although i'm also partial to desperate, AND to the final vignette, coming up later this morning. ;)

[kidsnurse]

I also liked this one at least as much, if not better that when I first read it.

yeah, i tend to do what i call "fidget" in the hour before i post. that's the only time i'm able to read these things as if i didn't write them, and sometimes it's at that point that i realize that something's missing, or unclear, or i'd like to see it developed further.

as you know, i'm even wont to change perfectly good titles in those final minutes before posting! ;)

[culuyetille]

*melts* Aww I just love it how House's unconventional treatment works! Wilson's so passive-agressive, forever responding to explosions with calm... Good thing House knows him better than anyone else ;]

[kidsnurse]

Wilson's so passive-agressive, forever responding to explosions with calm

and when he does explode, himself, it's on a grand scale--which is his own fault, because of all that holding-back that he normally engages in! ;)

[arwen_kenobi]

That has to be the best idea for an improvised sandwich ever! lol

[kidsnurse]

the best idea for an improvised sandwich

only if you aren't the one who has to eat the thing! ;)

[sy_dedalus]

Yes, does that sandwich have any basis in reality? It seemed remarkably detailed and, well, exactly like something someone non-fictional would do. Very vivid.

[kidsnurse]

does that sandwich have any basis in reality?

not to my knowledge. just a 'continuity' thing, really--house had mentioned that there was a paucity of foodstuffs available earlier, and bread seemed a likely thing to be out of. so i asked myself what koda (aka baby!house) would do in such a situation, and that's what immediately came to me! :)

[fyre_rayne]

So lovely. I adore Concerned!House, and the fact that it creeped out Wilson was a bonus. This was another marvelous addition to your series. I look forward to the next.

-ANimal

[kidsnurse]

I look forward to the next.

which will be posted shortly! can't believe it's the final one.... :(