1. Don't "press the triangle button" in your fics. It just sounds silly.
Kairi screamed as the giant milk carton thrashed her back and forth. "Sora, help me! Please, make him stop!"
"Don't worry," Sora exclaimed. "I'll just press the triangle button!"
Kairi stopped screaming and the milk carton stopped tossing her about.
"Huh?" said Kairi.
"Huh?" said
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