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[misskass]

Riku lost to Ansem, but he still couldn’t regain control over Riku. Ansem, however, isn't above fighting dirty to win this stalemate. Not a one-shot. My first KH fic, run now. Abuse,Anal,Angst,Bi,F/M/M,Language,M/M,Minor,N/C,Oral,Shouta,WAFF,WIP,Yaoi

Comments

[lazzchan]

you mean shouta? It does exist, it's the male version of a Lolita complex. =D When you like little boys instead of little girls....

Yet, unless Ansem was loving on little-kid Riku (like under the age of 11/12) then it's not the correct term.

[misskass]

Ssssssssh. >___<

I'm only familiar with the term 'shota', so naturally I thoguht it was a misspelling of that. But then again it's possible they're not using the right term, and are still wrong. I dunno. But now I feel like my rant applies to me. >__>.

[lazzchan]

No, no!! *snugs* Different spellings, hm? When you're trying to use romanji for anything Japanese, the spellings come off strange.

[dark_puck]

No kidding. *glares half-heartedly at the Sailor Moon fandom and their bajillion different ways to spell Saffir's name, not to mention the ol' Tenoh/Tenou/Ten'nou debate*

[caidentity]

...and I was so busy geeking out over language that I forgot what I was originally going to say. u_u; *woe*

So what I was going to say was that you know what?

That summary kind of scares me. >.> For more than one reason. Firstly because of the entire "my first fic!! :DDD" thing. But secondly because of that amazingly long list of things that said fic contains. >.>;;;;; If it's a first fic, is it really wise to be including that? I'm... kind of disturbed. D:

Not to mention, how the hell do you get abuse and WAFF going on? *shiver* Well, I could see it with some people's writing, but not in a first-fic thing. :D; That's just a little worrying.

[technobubblegum]

Aww man, you got to point out the "abuse AND WAFF?!" thing before me. D:

[yui_hime]

"Shouta" doesn't say anything that "M/M,Minor" didn't already, just like "yaoi" doesn't say anything "M/M" doesn't by itself. It's a shameless excuse to show off one's knowledge of Fanbrat-Japanese.

"yaoi" isn't even a real word outside of Fanpanese... D

[darknessdivine]

Shall we phone the Redundant Department of Redundancy's phone, then? XD

[yui_hime]

Yes. We must all learn to fear the redundant redundancy.

[tegurunrampant]

Sort of like my opinion that if your summary already has M/M or Yaoi and D/s in it, it doesn't need Mdom. I mean--Mdom? As opposed to what else?

[lynxgriffin]

Abuse, anal, angst, language, shota...

...And then WAFF?? D8}

[white_origami]

"My first KH fic, run now. "

Why, I believe I will.

Abuse,Anal,Angst,Bi,F/M/M,Language,M/M,Minor,N/C,Oral,Shouta,WAFF,WIP,Yaoi

...I feel like there should be a Double Yu - Teeh - Eff there somewhere. I just know it.