Lights Changing Color

[kerrykhat]

Title: Lights Changing Color
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Waking up in the hospital with Taylor beside her, Joss remembered John and Simmons and gunshots. She remembered a strange woman and everything hurting before darkness claimed her.
Disclaimer: CBS owns "Person of Interest" and all related characters; I own nothing.
Spoilers: For 3.09 "The Crossing

Comments

[jedibuttercup]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[joss80]

Awww, I love this so much, AND it makes me so sad at the same time (you know, with her being dead and all on the show). I like your version SO MUCH better. Thanks for writing it, and imagining what could have been!

[joanna_484]

I really enjoyed reading your version of the events after the shooting, which is so much more enjoyable than the canon version, haha. I especially liked seeing Joss and John both struggling to express and deal with their feelings for each other and what it means for the future of their relationship.

Great job!

[blacktop50]

I really enjoyed this story, especially your delicate and detailed look at how joss might respond to the emotional opening from Reese. Thank you for sharing yet another way of revising that dire ending of The Crossing.

[nacinom]

I love your well written, thoughtful alternate ending. I am bitter and sad too about Joss' death in the show. I am glad that she continues to live in your story.