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I Melt With You

Mar 11, 2010 16:38

Title: I Melt With You
Participants: Xabi Alonso/Guti
Disclaimer: The product of a sick and twisted mind......
Summary: Guti gets his man.....or does he?
Note: Written for the Cabin Fever key party.

( Could you love yourself any more than you already do? )

guti, xabi alonso, cabin fever

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nanousblues March 11 2010, 20:26:32 UTC

ö That is some good blow job, It seems...

rainstorm20 March 11 2010, 20:32:35 UTC

Well, this was my first time writing anything non Torres/Gerrard related, so I can only hope people like it. :D

Thank you!

nanousblues March 11 2010, 20:47:11 UTC

I did like! And I think you did pretty good! :)

inesdelsol March 11 2010, 21:05:07 UTC

nice icon btw :P

wanna drink? *winks*

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_runningmascara March 11 2010, 20:42:19 UTC

yay for not making this a pining for stevie!fic lol
i love guti and his slutty ways :P

rainstorm20 March 11 2010, 21:18:11 UTC

I think that as much as we all love some steamy Stevie/Xabi sex, it's a sad fact that they're not together anymore. :(

But there's always Nando.......

:D

inesdelsol March 11 2010, 21:03:13 UTC

o.0
holy mother of Iquer...$%^&*()_

Steven who? I think it's gonna be his new name.

Awesome fic!

rainstorm20 March 11 2010, 21:20:43 UTC

All those years writing slash in another fandom must have paid off. :D

Thanks for all of your compliments!

inesdelsol March 11 2010, 21:21:14 UTC

<3333 rawr

karneol_vision March 14 2010, 13:04:35 UTC

Nice! But for a 'not pining for Steven Gerrard'-fic, there was a great lot of Steven Gerrard in it. I'm still deciding if it wasn't too much for my liking, lol xDD

Also, I was really worried about Xabi indeed turning into the maiden while I was reading the first part, until finally the 'let me love you'-bit came up to. I think that was my favorite moment, very cool.

Fantastic sexy scenery :DD

karneol_vision March 14 2010, 13:10:42 UTC

I didn't mean to say that it's wrong to put the actual partner or another partner into the story! That's not at all the case, and actually I'm all in favor of doing it :D
Just not too much, so it might turn too awkward or kind of uneasy for all those who see them as an item, as these keys-parties also state that they are.

Not saying this happened here, lol, just my thoughts on the topic :)

rainstorm20 March 14 2010, 13:21:48 UTC

Hey, nothing wrong with voicing your thoughts; I like getting constructive criticism!

This was my first time writing Xabi/anyone else. Hell, my first time writing Xabi at all, lol!

I have to say, I did struggle with the addition of Steven Gerrard, and how to balance Xabi's apprehension(if that's the right word). Yes, Xabi misses him, but not to the point where he becomes a blushing maiden.

I hope. :D

karneol_vision March 14 2010, 13:37:38 UTC

I was more afraid of the way he seemed so quickly taken with Guti, and how easily he was becoming a blushing, sighing maiden for that man, lol. xD I don't like him being a blushing maiden for anyone; this girly shy vision of him just doesn't go with the suave and collected image I have of him :)

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