Darkness [Part 1]
Title: Darkness
Author: KeyJah
Characters/Pairings: Taeyeon, Yuri, Tiffany, Jessica, TaeNy, YulSic, TaeRi, JeTi, TaengSic, YulTi, small appearances by other SNSD members.
Length: Part 1
Genera: Angst, Romance, Smut.
Rating: R, NC-17
Summary: Darkness can have many layers with depths beyond what we can believe. What happens when you pull into it? Pulling ( Read more... )
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YOU LIKE IT?!?!?! -jumps in the air- YES~!
glad you like it ^^ ME PRO?! no way! I can never compete against some of the writters of this field. Twinpanda and Pooltides will always be the best of the best in my books~!
I didn't want to do a short teaser. It would have been appropreate but I felt if I gave a bigger portion and cut you off you'll want more >:D~!
LOL oh everyone's in for a long night so lets just leave it at that XDDD!~ gosh I wish I could tell you what happends but -zips lips-
I'm working on it now so i hope i can get far before my laptop dies on me D:~!
Yup, I will definatly message you and let you know when its up~! Thanks for commenting by the way, you made my night ^^
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they are so pro it's rediculous! ><~!
did i just get valled a bum >:O! XD jk~! I can;t just tell you (no matter how much i really really really REALLY want to!! ><) you just have to wait. It's still being thought out and typed so Im going as fast as I can.
Heartbreak? well ............... XD you just have to wait and see~! >
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You know, I usually hate love triangles and all that shit, but I honestly did want to see one with YulTaeNy. As you know, TaeRi and TaeNy are my otps so I did want to read one with them 3. And here you are providing it on a silver platter.
I'm definitely interested what will happen. I couldn't care less for the YulSic part though ahaha. I never really supported the "Royal Family". But I never followed any family really XD.
The steamy stuff was not bad. There were some parts that kinda ruined the flow/feel. Or maybe I just like my smut blunt XD.
Anyway keep it up. Looking forward to what happens....there are quite a lot of pairing tags you got there lols.
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Yeah you don't really see enough YulTaeNy I usually come across alot of YulTiSic so I thought ... we need change!!!!!!
At first I never actually intended on putting Jessica in it at all ... but then my mind just kind of took a turn on the straight path of my idea and well ... TADA Jessica happend!~ I think your gonna care just a little bit when her part comes into play XD!~ I'm so ... I can be really oblivious sometimes because I didn't realize I used the Royal Family till about half way through o.o -sigh facepalm- LOL
Blunt Smut is usually the best kind isn't it? XD and originally I wanted to do that too!!! damn my mind for making it this way ... maybe once this is done an it turns out good I'll write a smut with no distractions~ just pure steamy goodness XDDDDDD
I think I have my hands ... not even full ... overflowing with my pairings >< but it'll all come together in the end so ( ... )
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It's probably just me but yeah when smut starts having too many like similies, metaphors, and like "flowery" language, it distracts me XD. I just rather read the actions straight up haha. But you know, write how you feel. This isn't necessarily something bad, just a style.
But puleeze. I am far from great. I have so many doubts about my writing. You flatter me too much XD.
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Honestly, I don't know how I want this to end up either LOOL ... like my mind is in contemplation because of what direction I want to take it in >< LOOOL) But I do like bluntness which is what I will be considering and reminding myself of as I finish this story ^^!~ Different styles of writing show a part of yourself so I enjoy all writing!~
You shouldn't have doubt in your writing YOUR AMAZING!! (still cant wait for LMLMD update!) ... you make me sound like a fan girl =.= LOL but really i do enjoy the way you write and your ideas! and your sister too!! that Tiffraneezy series is just LMFAO worthy!!
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Lust lust...
Taeri?hmm...no.....
Jeti...im guessing fany went to search for Jessica.
Jeti...no...
Taeny...of course!
Yulsic....too!
Taengsic?
Yulti?
Eh...no....
My RF!
Im thinking...all this...
Is because of lust and confusion...
But all I know is that tae loves fany a lot and a lot...
And a lot...
Yuri loves jess too.
Update soon yeah?
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Everyone hurt everyone in a way!~
The pairing may look odd right now but once its up youll understand and maybe actually like them ^^!~
YES RF FTW!~
Yes lots of love but alot of desire and confusion comes with it.
Still writting it I'll update soon I hope ^^!~
thanks for the comment <3
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roaaarrrrrrr!!!!!!!!! i shipped all the pairings you mentioned above hahaha so...i'm really anticipating the moments of every each of the pairings fuuuuuuuuuuuu
nice one....keep it up!!!
please update soon and keep me updated too LOL xD jk...
i like it!! good job! xD
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My hands are still shaking and thats not even the SMUT part ... o.o what have I gotten myself into???? -dies-
Yes!~ Ship every pairing (just ship TaeNy more ok? LOL jk~!)
oh anticipate!! it will get better!!
I will try and type as fast as I can't and I will let you know when its up~!
Glad you like and thanks so much~! <3
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Taeyeon will forever be perverted ... but right now i feel really wrong o.o I'm writing it and i got to the smut part and I can;t bring myself to type it! AHHHH ><
I will do it though for my readers ><"""""""
Hoping to update soon, be on the lookout~! Thanks for the comment!~ ^^ surprised you weren;t first comment, you usually are LOL~! ^^
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your ninja posts mess with me cause it's like ... YOUR ALWAYS FIRST O.O
I was getting worried that you didn't post acimment when I put it up xD
I shall save you a spot then when it's up
or maybe I'll see if you can be super ninja again and post first without me saving u a spot LOOOL
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