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kevriel

A Beautiful Lie

Jun 19, 2011 03:53

Title: A Beautiful Lie
Pairing: Eli/Kevin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Eli and Kevin are in a relationship but they have to hide it from everyone. In a relationship full of lies and pretences... is just one truth enough?

( We’re not just lying to the others. We lie to each other too. But most of all, we lie to ourselves. )

pairing: eli/kevin; rating: pg-13

Comments 19

seroun June 18 2011, 22:53:58 UTC

I'M.... CRYING..... T_T That was so sad but so beautiful! Ahh I can feel their pain... great story!

kevriel June 19 2011, 05:58:12 UTC

Thank u so much! I feel bad tho that my first elvin fic is a sad one. I really wanted to give them a happy ending but writing at 3 am in the morning gives u depressing ideas. LOL I'm writing a happy elvin fic rite now tho! ^^

seroun June 19 2011, 09:17:49 UTC

Cool! Can't wait to read that one too!

happy_girl89 June 19 2011, 00:22:05 UTC

SPOT!
will be back to read~
PLEASE REMIND ME. ^^

REMINDER XD kevriel June 19 2011, 15:24:52 UTC

Please read my fic XD Comments would be very much appreciated ^^

Re: REMINDER XD happy_girl89 June 29 2011, 13:54:38 UTC

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I.SHOULD.JUST.NOT.READ.THIS.

i was crying after reading this. (and guess what. i wetted my notebook for ass. great. ._.)

this was @#$%^&* great! (oh, and my smashes mean no harm. ^^)

i don't know how to describe this. the feeling that i was reading was like a reality. TRUTHFUL REALITY.

and how i wish o could right like you... *_____*

oh....., i'll add you as a friend and i hope to read all of your fics. :D

yukihime13 June 19 2011, 07:08:42 UTC

jkadjksajkdsd /le cries

i dont even know how to say this properly...

ELI YOU SHOULD HAVE DONE SOMETHING! i dont know what.. just anything.. T.T

i understand how kevin felt when he found out david's korean name.. YOU NAMED YOUR SON AFTER OPPA, ELI HONEY. <33

and the way eli explained what sunghyun meant to his son was aigoo... T,T

i caught the flu too /le cries

kevriel June 19 2011, 15:23:41 UTC

awhh thank u so much! now i feel like crying! LOL. Here *gives tissue* I'm actually having the flu for real. XD I've always liked Kevin's korean name. Thx again for commenting! ^^

anca_chan June 19 2011, 16:09:33 UTC

So eventually why did they part ways anyhow? Was it because they were both males, or...? And em, Eli was quick to marry and have a child lol. If all that happened five years ago and their son was four.

I liked it, especially the ending. That one last line makes you smile even if it is sad.

kevriel June 19 2011, 16:24:39 UTC

What i had in mind was yeah, they parted because they were both males n that kind of relationship was opposed by everyone especially their families. As for Eli's marriage it had something to do with his family forcing him n it's his own way to 'supposedly' forget Kevin n move on. But really, it's up to you how you wanna interpret it :)

Glad u liked it! ^^

tegoliamasu June 19 2011, 17:12:41 UTC

u write it so beautifully though the story is heartbreaking...I can feel their heartache T_T...poor boys.. they have to give up on their love bcoz of the cruel reality
love it much xD..please write more Elvin :DD hehe... xD

kevriel June 20 2011, 09:33:30 UTC

Thank u so much! Yeah, i'm trying to write a happy elvin fic but somehow it ends up sad. N i have to rewrite, rewrite n rewrite!! LOL.