[fic] Dignified

Oct 04, 2009 22:35

OH HEY LOOK WHOSE BIRTHDAY! Coincidentally, I have fic! I love when this happens. It's almost as if I planned it ( Read more... )

pot: atobe, fanfic, challenges: mission_insane, genre: gen

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jackalackala October 5 2009, 16:53:03 UTC
Aww, little Atobe is always so cute. <3 You did a great job with this. :-)

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ketchupblood October 5 2009, 19:18:13 UTC
Isn't he? Poor crazy kid. xD Thanks!

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everlind October 5 2009, 19:38:58 UTC
Simply wonderful.

You've truly managed to turn Atobe in a believable child. What I liked most is that Atobe acts like he is taught to, but you give us insights as to what his true impulses are. The atmosphere was just right too, how bored a kid his age must be and yet he tries so hard to keep his manners.

Great job, I loved it!

Thanks for sharing!

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ketchupblood October 5 2009, 22:03:14 UTC
Atobe's just wonderful, and little Atobe is adorably wonderful. :D I feel like the more I think about him, the more I fall in love with him.

I'm really glad you liked it!

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ravenery October 5 2009, 19:48:23 UTC
♥_♥ Loved it! & will reread it tomorrow *o*

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ketchupblood October 5 2009, 22:03:36 UTC
♥! Yay! I'm really glad you liked it.

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ice_flow October 5 2009, 20:04:58 UTC
Loved it! Especially the end. All little kids would be like that, even if the anime showed him as a dominating arrogant brat that first day at Hyoutei. LOL But really, you did a good job with this one. And Chibi-Atobe is always adorable. XD

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ketchupblood October 5 2009, 22:07:11 UTC
D: I actually wanted this to mesh with anime canon. I mean, I think that a kid who was taught that he is better than everyone and that he should order everyone "beneath him" around would be the Atobe that the anime showed, especially around other kids, when he would almost definitely feel no intimidation.

Still, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for commenting!

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kantayra October 5 2009, 22:31:00 UTC
D'aww, poor little Atobe. At least he has his tennis, though. :D

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ketchupblood October 5 2009, 23:40:05 UTC
All of the PoT boys are such tennis idiots. :D It's how they cope with Life, I suppose.

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