You've truly managed to turn Atobe in a believable child. What I liked most is that Atobe acts like he is taught to, but you give us insights as to what his true impulses are. The atmosphere was just right too, how bored a kid his age must be and yet he tries so hard to keep his manners.
Loved it! Especially the end. All little kids would be like that, even if the anime showed him as a dominating arrogant brat that first day at Hyoutei. LOL But really, you did a good job with this one. And Chibi-Atobe is always adorable. XD
D: I actually wanted this to mesh with anime canon. I mean, I think that a kid who was taught that he is better than everyone and that he should order everyone "beneath him" around would be the Atobe that the anime showed, especially around other kids, when he would almost definitely feel no intimidation.
Still, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for commenting!
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You've truly managed to turn Atobe in a believable child. What I liked most is that Atobe acts like he is taught to, but you give us insights as to what his true impulses are. The atmosphere was just right too, how bored a kid his age must be and yet he tries so hard to keep his manners.
Great job, I loved it!
Thanks for sharing!
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I'm really glad you liked it!
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Still, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for commenting!
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