FIC: L.A. Story (CW RPS, Jared/Jensen)

[kestrelsan]

Title: L.A. Story
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 4144
Summary: Jensen's kind of clueless
Notes: My spn_holidays story, written for walkawayslowly, who requested J2, unrequited love turning requited. Thanks to prillalar for beta and cheerleading :).

Comments

[hesychasm]

This is SO HOT and like, boyish and manly and sexy and then, suddenly, really achingly sweet. I DID NOT KNOW you had a scene like that foursome in you. I applaud you heartily!

[kestrelsan]

LOL, I don't know what it is about this fandom, because you know I hardly ever write porn, but that's all I want to write for them *g*. Glad the foursome scene worked! It's sad how little het I've actually written, because that was fun. *hugs you*

[goldenseal]

Aw I really liked this! Hot and sad and poignant in all the right places. Lovely:)

[kestrelsan]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!

[santacarlagypsy]

I love this. How the boys complicate things, how everything is much easier than either of them allow it to be. It's both very sexy and sweet, which is one of my most favorite mixes in fic.

My favorite: the Sharpie scene. Very hot... Jared leans over his ear. "I think I'm gonna fuck you, Jen." ~ Mmm. There's just something about the way Jared tells Jensen, instead of asks.

Awesome job! ♥

[kestrelsan]

They really do overcomplicate things :). Glad the Sharpie scene was hot, and I'm very pleased that the sexy-and-sweet combo came through, so yay! Thank you.

[lazy_daze]

OH, this is just gorgeous! And fucking hot, GAH. Beautifully real seeming. <3

[kestrelsan]

Thank you! I'm very glad it felt real, and also hot :). And I owe you feedback on your spn_holidays story, because that was just freaking fantastic, but I'll go do that over there :).

[evil_witch666]

This is exactly the kind of story I needed today. just fantastic. Thanks for sharing.

[kestrelsan]

I'm so glad it served that purpose! Thanks for commenting :).