Fic: Freshman Fifteen (Prince of Tennis, MomoKai)

[kestrelsan]

Title: Freshman Fifteen
Pairing: MomoKai
Rating: R
Word count: 3000
Summary: High school's over, and Momo's slacking off.
Notes: A little MomoKai written for prillalar to promote good will for rivals everywhere :D.

Comments

[flambeau]

...so I don't know who these guys are, but I worried about them through the entire story, in case they'd get things wrong, and it's really very, very sweet. :)

[kestrelsan]

Hee! Actually, if any of them could find a way to get it wrong, it would be these guys *g*. I'm so glad you liked it! I really do adore them.

[flambeau]

Hey, now I do know who they are -- I'm watching PoT eps while my giant-ass Bleach download chugs along with the speed and grace of a glacier. It's definitely keeping me entertained (to be more exact, whenever anyone mentions a special secret skill or attack or whatever, I giggle my head off). But I do kinda like tournament series. :)

[kestrelsan]

The special moves are the best! OMG, the names. So, so cracky. I fell in love with Momo when he came up with the Super Great Momoshiro Special--how could anyone top that? *g*

I didn't expect to fall for it the way I did, but there's something really addictive about the whole tournament structure. And each match is like a little PWP of, uh, "tennis" *g*. But really, the boys are so sweet and it has so much charm (and crack). I hope you keep watching! And then I can bug you to write fanfic for it :D. How far are you into it?

[featherfire]

Usually I don't read MomoKai fics, but I gotta say, that was really cute. It had a nice pace and was really very sweet, how awkward they were. ♥

He bet kissing An would be a lot nicer than stupid, non-calling Kaidoh.

That made me giggle.

Momo ducked behind a fern, but it only came up to his waist.

And picturing this in my mind made me laugh out loud.

[kestrelsan]

Thank you! I have a huge weakness for MomoKai, and I was glad to finally write them. I kind of like the picture of Momo behind that fern, too *g*.

[norcalsanjifan]

Oh Kaidoh <3 You're such a bitchy girl sometimes XD I love you~

Thank you for this~ a little momokai makes everyday better XD

[kestrelsan]

Hee! He really is. And MomoKai really does make everything better. Thank you!

[paffu]

aaww it's been so long since i've found new momokai fics to read >_< they are one of my favorites! GREAT FIC!! *-* these two dorks are so much love <3 i hope you write more soon!

[kestrelsan]

I love them but this is my first time writing them--they were so much fun :D. Thank you so much! I hope I write more of them, too.

[prillalar]

Yay! You posted it! STILL SO MUCH LOVE OMG.

You are such a master with details -- like the condensation on Momo's beer -- you set the scenes so well. And your Momo is love and your Kaidoh is love and their grouchy love is love.

And the gum. Still thinking about the gum. ♥♥♥

[kestrelsan]

I do love the gum *g*. And mmmm, grouchy love. It's the best kind! I'm so glad you got me to write them :D.