Fic: Freshman Fifteen (Prince of Tennis, MomoKai)

Jan 09, 2011 10:42

Title: Freshman Fifteen
Pairing: MomoKai
Rating: R
Word count: 3000
Summary: High school's over, and Momo's slacking off.
Notes: A little MomoKai written for prillalar to promote good will for rivals everywhere :D.

Freshman Fifteen )

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viherkyn January 9 2011, 23:14:18 UTC
Aww. <3 This was sweet and funny and so like Momo and Kaidou. Thank you! ^^

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kestrelsan January 11 2011, 03:23:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad it felt like them--they were so much fun to write :D.

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longleggedgit January 10 2011, 04:17:09 UTC
This was so great. ♥ I love the two of them being kind of lost and stupid after high school stops providing them with excuses to be all over each other and trying to figure out how to keep things going. Lovely lovely lovely. Thank you. :)

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kestrelsan January 11 2011, 03:26:38 UTC
That's totally it about high school providing the excuse--I feel like it would be hard for them to believe that things could actually change (and being really stupid about it *g*). I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know :D.

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nivell January 10 2011, 11:29:33 UTC
Wow, it has been a looong time since I've read good MomoKai fics...a shame that this community isn't active anymore. Great fic.

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kestrelsan January 11 2011, 03:27:39 UTC
I know, we need more MomoKai! I'm glad you enjoyed it--thank you!

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raipuppy January 10 2011, 15:49:05 UTC
MomoKai needs more love. Seriously. And this made me giggle. Awkward boys are awkward <3

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kestrelsan January 11 2011, 03:28:56 UTC
They make me happy :). So glad you enjoyed this! And yes, definitely with the awkward *g*. Thank you!

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laurashapiro January 11 2011, 03:54:07 UTC
They're such adolescents! Such BOYS. I love the awkwardness and the rudeness, all of it. I kind of want to thwap them rather than hugging them, but it's still sexy and fun to read. Nice job. (:

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kestrelsan January 12 2011, 02:00:55 UTC
They really are! It's what I love about them *g* (though they could probably use some thwapping, too). Thanks for reading :D.

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