Brigit's Flame Entry- Week 3

[keppiehed]

Comments

[vyvyan_wilde]

That was such a sad story. From the beginning I was drawn in to the vivid feeling of helplessness of a woman stuck in the life she thought she deserved and had to live. So powerful.

[keppiehed]

Thank you, I hope that those feelings came through as realistic, and that I did justice to women in that situation. It was a big subject to tackle for teeth! I hope that you liked it, even though it was grim. Thanks for leaving a comment!

[literaryspell]

Oh, beautiful but heartbreaking. I need to go kiss some puppies or something. You play those heartstrings like a harp, my dear.

[keppiehed]

Hehehe...thanks. I didn't have my trusty beta for this, so I am sure you were groaning and shaking your head throughout. I hope it wasn't too over-done. Thanks for reading it!

[rephen]

Ah. Well done. The pace, the characterizations of the abusive father and the strong mother and their innocent son were splendid. I enjoyed reading this very much. You have such a good handle on the pace and the realism of the piece. Very nice work.

Good luck at BF this week.

[keppiehed]

Thank you for your compliments! That means a lot, coming from the reigning champ! I really hope to make it to next week, so I will grab onto your proffered good luck, and hope some of it rubs off on me!

[faerie_spark]

Heartbreaking, and well-written.

[keppiehed]

I appreciate that. I aimed for both, so I am glad that you felt that way. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave me your thoughts.

[jashelle1]

Wow. That was heartwrenching. The part where Jack had her teeth in his hands was beautiful. Kids have such a different perspective on things thatn adults.

[keppiehed]

I am glad that you liked it. You are right about kids. I am glad that part came through. Thanks for reading!