Comments | keiyuu_ruka: a Co-Written Fic : Beyond Expectation

keiyuu_ruka

a Co-Written Fic : Beyond Expectation

Apr 28, 2011 21:10

Title: Beyond Expectation
Author: keiyuu_ruka, koigaii, kawaiinopink , sweet_pleione
Pairing: YabuxInoo, slight TakakixDaiki
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/ Fluff, Slight Angst
Word Count: 3332
Summary: We’ll keep this empty :P

( Inoo Kei was born with all perfection, high pride and ultimate luck. )

fanfiction, fandom: hey! say! jump!, pairing : inoo/yabu, pairing : takaki/daiki

Comments 39

aliciaswr April 28 2011, 15:03:02 UTC

Weee~

aliciaswr April 28 2011, 15:09:57 UTC

This is awesome. For a co-written fic to flow so well, it was really well done. =)

keiyuu_ruka April 28 2011, 15:35:28 UTC

Thank you so much Alice >////<
Gaii asked me to say "sorry if it's messy" and Pink said the same way i did, while Cwitt went to the corner, blushing XDD

aliciaswr April 29 2011, 13:46:46 UTC

You're welcome. It's not messy! =)
So cute Cwitt! xD

Thread 5

chii_mao_13 April 28 2011, 16:06:17 UTC

SPOT the second place!

keiyuu_ruka April 29 2011, 10:00:52 UTC

lol, dozo~

chii_mao_13 May 1 2011, 11:28:07 UTC

Finally I can online again on lj!! XDDDD
sorry for soooo late comment... XC

inoo, you give up so easily at first.. >.<
who knows that yabu'll love you back..

daiki is kinda mean here.. but still cute.. <3333 fufufufufu

"I'm sorry. But I just feel restless." There's a small pause before Kota continued, "Have you talked to Inoo-kun about his recent condition? I was kind of worry about him." And the phone he was holding slipped off his hand.
LOL!!! Baka yabu!!! XDDD don't you realize that it's inoo himself??

On the other line, Daiki threw a confused look to the two guys before him. Yuya looked at his boyfriend then to his best friend.
I don't know why, but i laughed at this part whenever i imagine the scene.. XD

"Wait," Kei stopped Kota from leaving. He caught Kota's wrist and pulled him to sit on his bed once again. The younger boy cupped Kota's face and closed the gap between them. He landed his lips softly against the latter ( ... )

keiyuu_ruka May 1 2011, 13:36:38 UTC

yea Inoo is so random, too random actually!
no doubt about that XDD

and...yay for TaDaiki too lol

thanks a lot eev, you always makes me and them (others author of this random fic) flutter and fly to the outspace lol
*glomps*

Thread 8

suyooyuuchie14 April 28 2011, 16:11:41 UTC

sweet!!

yahachii April 28 2011, 21:49:43 UTC

third! haha.. I'll be back to give a proper comment.. :D

yahachii April 29 2011, 05:49:18 UTC

hihihihihihihihihihihihi.... :D <3

whooaaat? This is one shot?! I thought it is going to be multi-chap... T___T..

anyway, this is great.. though there are some differences with the style of writing, the flow is smooth and clear. having four great writers in one fic is not easy but you guys pulled it off..

otsukaresama~ ^_^

keiyuu_ruka April 29 2011, 09:58:08 UTC

Hyachii~~!!!!
lol, can you guess which part written by each of us? XD

thanks ne ^^

yahachii April 29 2011, 15:43:42 UTC

Rukachii~~ hihi.. I'm back for the meantime.. ^_^

about that, it's kinda hard ne~ haha.. I think I can't guess yet.. and I haven't read much fics from pink-san yet so i can't guess now..

you're welcome.. ^_^

Thread 11

inooislove April 29 2011, 04:30:11 UTC

=)
I'm going to read it now.

inooislove April 29 2011, 04:46:52 UTC

Uwah.I feel like this is written by one author.

The combination of 4 great authors = the power of inoobu.

keiyuu_ruka April 29 2011, 09:59:49 UTC

it's be moooore crack wonderful if you joined us XD

kawaiinopink April 30 2011, 17:04:03 UTC

YabuNoo's Love Power XDDD