An Interesting Addiction -- Orginal

[kei_rin]

Title: An Interesting Addiction
Fandom: Original
Prompt: 78 -- Emancipation
Warnings: A bit crack-y.
Rating: G
Summary: It’s a slow slide into slavery.
A/N: I believe I was fought on this one every step of the way and my muse went on a really weird direction with this prompt. But after a couple false starts I got it in the end. For the tamingthemuse prompt 78

Comments

[sparrow2000]

Hee, interesting and weird (but in a good way) side step on the prompt this week. If this is from personal experience, you really do have a problem, hon!

Really liked the idea of being able to get an extension on your paper because you were suffering from a bout of Tetris - very funny. And the last line made me hoot.

You might just want to take another little trip through it for the odd typo
"Nipping slowly at reason and logic until it makes since with the way that life works." I think there might be a few words missing in the middle of this sentence?
2nd para
"the power of the crystals your suppose to move the blocks" - you're supposed
3rd para
(quit possibly at the same time) - quite possibly
Hope you don't mind me pointing these out, love. It's so easy to have things fall through the net, it happens to me all the time.

Really nice, wacky piece!

[kei_rin]

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

If this is from personal experience, you really do have a problem, hon!
Lol! ^_^ Nope not from personal experience more like an extreme (very extreme) hyperbola.

Thank you for pointing out those mistakes. I read over it but things always slip through. I didn’t find a problem with the first line you brought up, but I guess it could be confusing so I tried to fix it. Hope everything is okay now. *Looks over it again.*