[fic] Hana (華) - SagaXShou - Oneshot
Title : Hana (華)
Chapter : 1/1 (One-shot)
Author : Kei Kyuuketsuki
Fandom : Alice Nine
Pairings : SagaXShou
Theme Song : Alice Nine - 華
Rating : PG
Genre : drama, romance, songfic
Warning : malexmale relationship, yaoi
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Interpreting the rose petals literally, aah, how romantic~! *swoon* I was pretty much done for from that point forward. Shou and Saga in a bathtub together OH MY GOD
*cough*
Seriously though, even if Shou was still wearing all his clothes, it doesn't matter.
I have to say, what I liked best was how a lot of the dialogue felt very in character. Particularly Saga saying What will the fans say if they see you like this? They will definitely think that I’m the one who hurt you and make you cry… sounded very much like words I could hear him saying, because they didn't sound derived. Rather, they sounded true, and very Japanese. Does that make sense? I'm rambling, sorry. Thank you, in any case! I was glad to read this pairing, and I had fun singing the lines you put into the fic as I was reading.
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*hugs you* ..*sends you a lot of cookies*
in Alice Nine, this is my OTP too! And this is my Alice Nine's favorite song..>////<
Lyrics made by Shou are aaall full of imagination, aren't it? So, there, I just put it into some real condition..lol >////<
Ahaaa..there..I wanted to make Shou in frantic condition where he desperately wanted to hear explanation from Saga..I hope it's ok?
And THAT ONE! I was sooo happy reading that "sounded true" part..>////< ..I didn't expect that it would turn out like that..really..(///w///)
Nooo~ I love your ramblings! I really do! *sends you more cookies*
Thank you so much for reading this and thank you so much for your very lovely comment! (o///w///)o
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