I love the comparison of the events of Razor to her nearly killing him. If only they hadn't written it all later they could actually have had consequences like this for Lee and Kara! And needless to say, very sexy. Lovely job :)
Balancing Kara shooting Lee with Lee ordering Kara to stay behind and die makes the events of the Razor feel so much less like some just making up reason why they couldn't be together.
I like this. The transfer request form is beautiful and I like how it took them several nights to get it right. Plus it always helps to have Lee drunk because that keeps him from over-thinking the whole thing and messing it up.
Guh! So very sexy and gorgeous. I love his wonder and her sureness. It makes sense that she would just decide and he would trail after wondering what in the hell had just happened. Nice job, bb!
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And thanks!
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