Jewish 20-Somethings Essay

[kazoojew]

I wanted to share the essay I wrote for the application for this conference:
http://www.jewishleaders.net/think.html

I'm not looking for any feedback for the essay necessarily, but I just wanted to show you what I've been thinking and dreaming...

Comments

[tos1981]

I know you didn't ask for feedback, but I just thought I'd let you know that in the second line you say "after they graduating college." this should probably be changed to either "after graduating college" or "after they graduate college"

Thanks

[kazoojew]

Unfortunately, I submitted this before you caught that typo. It's OK though.

[animorah]

This summarizes what you've been talking about for quite some time.