Comments | kayliemalinza: ramble!verse forgotten snippet: Pike's rack

kayliemalinza

ramble!verse forgotten snippet: Pike's rack

Jun 23, 2010 19:32

I CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT THIS. I wrote this snippet to be included with the ramble!fic wherein Pike is a woman for realsies but forgot about it until after I'd already finished and posted.

So here you go:

( 230 words, Jim is insensitive, Pike starts to look on the bright side )

st: ramble!verse, skoosh skoosh, fic, star trek, fic: deleted snippet

Comments 5

rubynye June 24 2010, 02:00:43 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Omg.

kayliemalinza June 24 2010, 14:03:04 UTC

:DDDDDD

I love how responsive you are.

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kayliemalinza June 24 2010, 14:02:02 UTC

That is an excellent story. :DDD

And somehow I'm not surprised that people who spend much of their time immersed in chlorine are unconcerned about heavy metal poisoning. ^^

That's a good moral! I think it's safe to say that everyone is on board with it!

yaaaay dialogue. now if only we could work out how to kidnap CFine and BrGw, then you could hear it exactly for realsies.

possibly_thrice June 24 2010, 03:45:33 UTC

I can see the revelation dawning on Pike's (womanly) face. And it is beautiful.

kayliemalinza June 24 2010, 13:44:33 UTC

...and immediately after he ordered Lt. Uhura to send his measurements to a private channel on Earth, and shortly received a responding missive which stated simply, "You fucking suck and I hate you."

Pike beamed for hours. :D