Comments | kayliemalinza: TW fic: "Employee Orientation" (PG13, 677 words, pre-S1, Jack, Tosh and Suzie)

kayliemalinza

TW fic: "Employee Orientation" (PG13, 677 words, pre-S1, Jack, Tosh and Suzie)

Oct 03, 2008 06:49

Title: Employee Orientation ( Read more... )

tw: pre s1, fic, tw: jack/everything ever, tw fic series: employee orientation, torchwood, fic: pg-13

Comments 8

thrace_adams October 4 2008, 02:15:51 UTC

Oh this made me smile.

padawanpooh October 4 2008, 14:39:38 UTC

Fit her like a glove. Heh.

Nice vignette - I love the interplay between Tosh & Jack ;-D

kayliemalinza October 5 2008, 23:04:40 UTC

Fit her like a glove. Heh.
i c u c whut i did thar. >P

I was little worried when typing this up that Jack was too flirty with Tosh-- I get the impression that he's careful with her, especially considering what we know from Fragments-- but then again, he might have quickly realized that she doesn't get flustered easily? idk idk.

mylenn October 4 2008, 21:45:14 UTC

I like this fic. Very cute!

copperbadge October 7 2008, 03:32:29 UTC

Classic vintage Jack! I love his banter with Suzie.

And poor Tosh, trying to figure it all out...

kelspots December 27 2008, 08:26:16 UTC

"In my pants," Jack said.

There was a long silence.

That long silence is the proof that Tosh is acclimating well.