Comments | kayliemalinza: TW fic: "Even Orange Juice Can Be an Occupational Hazard" (PG, 545 words, Jack/Ianto)

kayliemalinza

TW fic: "Even Orange Juice Can Be an Occupational Hazard" (PG, 545 words, Jack/Ianto)

Oct 02, 2008 08:38

Title: Even Orange Juice Can Be an Occupational Hazard ( Read more... )

fic: pg, tw: jack/ianto, fic, tw: s2, torchwood

Comments 24

thaddeusfavour October 2 2008, 21:11:13 UTC

Ah god! Lovely! I love the simple times between missions, even if they don't stay simple for long.

Loved this bit:

"Right," said Ianto. "It could be the vanguard of a pulp-based invasion force."

And this bit as well (esp. the blue eyes):

Jack snapped his gaze to Ianto, who noticed (not for the first time) how ridiculously blue his eyes were. "Why?" Jack asked. "Does it look rotten, too?"

"No," said Ianto. "But it is trying to eat her baby."

tintop_lizzy October 2 2008, 21:12:37 UTC

This is what I call the TW classic era; chasing aliens over an interrupted breakfast.

catalinacat October 2 2008, 21:36:01 UTC

hahahha, that was really cute!
especially Ianto saying, "No. But it is trying to eat her baby."
I can totally picture that :)

misswinterhill October 2 2008, 22:14:39 UTC

The omelet in particular was made of win, but the rest of the dialogue worked so well and stayed IC :) Thanks for posting it.

pinky0007 October 2 2008, 22:30:36 UTC

Thank you for this it really made my day. :)