What Have I Done? - Prologue - R

[kavikalphawolf]

Title: What Have I Done?
Author: Kavikalphawolf
Beta: None
Chapter: 0/?
Band/Pairing: Tora/Shou [alice nine.]
Rating: R
Genre: Angst
Warnings: Non-con
Disclaimer: Do not own these guys.
Comment(s): Came out of nowhere. Just wanted to write a non-con fic, even if this has only bits and pieces of the actual act.
Summary: His head was pressed to the cold wall,

Comments

[sazeixrinshou]

OMG. . .Poor shou-kun ;A; *pat him*
i'm pity with him although i didnt want to blame tora at all. .XD
are you planning to make a sequel to this fic?O_O i wanted to know what will happen to shou soon. .Dx

[kavikalphawolf]

I'm considering making this a multichapter fic, but I'm not sure. XD Depends on what people want, I guess.

Thanks for reading and commenting! XD

[sazeixrinshou]

Make a multichapter~*begging you*
i dont know why but i think toraxshou has become my OTP... xD *feel betraying my saga*
they looked so good together~8D

[kavikalphawolf]

I shall consider it~ XD I can't make any promises, though.

Same here. XD They look absolutely gorgeous together and fit best together because they've known each other the longest of any two members of the band. X3

[hotlikerobots]

I really really like this. *smiles*

The choice of words was beautiful and so as the plot. Though they're not really my favorite pairing I've been getting the hang of reading ToraxShou fics lately because they're like...the least-written pair nee? But most ToraxShou fics are well-written so I got sort of addicted. =^-^=

Danggg, why is it that Tora's always the bad-drunk-turned-rapist in most of the rape fics in here? Hahaha!

But this is really good! ♥

[kavikalphawolf]

Thank you. XD I'm glad you think the plot and word choice is beautiful. I was a bit unsure of the repetitiveness of some words.

He's been that in another story before? o_o I don't think I've ever read one of him like that before. XD; I mainly did this because I wanted to add in Shou and didn't want to make him the rapist like in my other fic. And I can't really see Nao, Saga, or Hiroto as one. XD;

Thanks! X3

[hotlikerobots]

Some words were repeated, yes but it was executed appropriately so you dont have to worry about it. ^^

Yes, actually. I'm writing a fic like that with chibi_bisque but it's a ToraxSaga one. And yes, I can't see any other members who'd fit the role too. Hahaha! And I read above that you're considering making this as a multi-chapter fic? That'll be awesome! Cant wait for more. ♥

[kavikalphawolf]

Oh, I thought you meant there were a lot of fics with him as a drunken rapist. XD; But I can't wait to read you guys' fic, either way. XD

[comet_kid]

Oh God, poor Shou. I just want to bundle him up in cotton wool and keep him all safe and sound after that. It ends on such a sad note, too, but I think that sometimes an unresolved ending is nice in it's own way~

This was something very very nice to read before bed XD

[kavikalphawolf]

I agree. Sometimes it's nice for it to be left up to your own mind as to what happens next. X3

Thanks! XD I'm glad you think so.

[jelliepish]

This is good >3333

But I felt like it was only the beginning and I hope you get to continue it ^___^

[kavikalphawolf]

Thank you! XD

I shall continue it, as so many people want it. XD Thanks for reading and commenting.

[kavikalphawolf]

Thanks. XD

It might be a multi-chapter, actually. X3

Thanks for reading and commenting. XD