Holiday Drabbly Bits: Merry Christmas to ECHOINAUTUMN!

Dec 11, 2011 08:21

Title: No Such Thing as Coincidence in Command Track
Author: katmarajade
Written for: echoinautumn
Pairing: George/Winona
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1856
Prompt: academy, love as war, as much of Jim in them as possible
Summary: Winona is surprised to find herself in a Command track strategy class. What's more surprising is how she got there.
Notes: This was my first time ( Read more... )

char: st: george kirk, fandom: star trek: aos/tos, char: st: winona kirk, hdb 2011, st: george/winona, holiday drabbly bits!, fic

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rubynye December 11 2011, 21:29:04 UTC
BWEE. I love George/Winona, and I love how you can see Jim in both of them and how different and complementary they are.

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katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:50:03 UTC
*bounces* I was so excited to try this pairing! And I kept pondering over how to show Jim in each of them but keep them their own people and make them work together. So glad it worked! :D

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secretsolitaire December 11 2011, 23:17:46 UTC
Awesome! *claps* I could definitely see how these two produced the cocky, blue-eyed genius that is Jim. :-)

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katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:51:31 UTC
*grins* YAY! I'm so glad that came across, because there was much out loud pondering on the subject! the cocky, blue-eyed genius that is Jim *dies giggling* spot on.

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echoinautumn December 12 2011, 18:26:34 UTC
This is so much more than what I'd hoped for when I prompted them. I try to split Jim between the two of them when I write them, but you do it so much better--the passion from Winona and the cocky brilliance from George all make so much sense. I love how intense Winona is, how much she cares, and you can really see how she drew George in. This is amazing, thank you so, so, so much!

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katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:54:16 UTC
\o/ YAY! I'm so pleased you like it! *dances* I know-- it's hard! There was a lot of out loud pondering trying to figure out how to split Jim's characteristics but keep them separate but keep both these two characters their own people at the same time ... *throws hands in air* I'm just glad it came across. I love how intense Winona is, how much she cares, and you can really see how she drew George in. *happy sigh* YAY! Just what I was hoping for. I'm so so so happy you liked it. :D I'm actually rather pleased with this one myself! Might have to expand on it later. (it sort of took on a life of its own!)

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katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:55:23 UTC
Oh, this makes me so happy! You totally got so much of what I was trying to get into each of their characters. I'm so glad it worked.

Thank you so much!

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iteari December 13 2011, 03:56:45 UTC
I love the crackle of heat you can feel between these two already. And I love how much of a lioness you've made of Winona.

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katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:56:29 UTC
*grins* I love writing this kind of stage, crackling heat and UST. Yes, please! Lioness is a great word for her. *nods* Thank you so much!

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