Comments | katmarajade: Holiday Drabbly Bits: Merry Christmas to ECHOINAUTUMN!

katmarajade

Holiday Drabbly Bits: Merry Christmas to ECHOINAUTUMN!

Dec 11, 2011 08:21

Title: No Such Thing as Coincidence in Command Track
Author: katmarajade
Written for: echoinautumn
Pairing: George/Winona
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1856
Prompt: academy, love as war, as much of Jim in them as possible
Summary: Winona is surprised to find herself in a Command track strategy class. What's more surprising is how she got there.
Notes: This was my first time ( Read more... )

char: st: george kirk, fandom: star trek: aos/tos, char: st: winona kirk, hdb 2011, st: george/winona, holiday drabbly bits!, fic

Comments 26

circ_bamboo December 13 2011, 04:25:20 UTC

Oh, that's adorable! I love your Winona so very much, and your George, too!

katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:57:11 UTC

*grins* Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you liked them so much! :)

beatrice_otter December 13 2011, 04:27:29 UTC

I love this, how you wrote Winona.

katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:57:48 UTC

I'm so pleased to hear that. Thank you. ♥

fickery December 13 2011, 09:26:27 UTC

Loved this. Loved Winona's fierceness and conviction, and George's charm but also his genuine admiration for her intelligence and abilities.

katmarajade December 14 2011, 14:59:48 UTC

You've made me so happy! Thank you! I'm so pleased that those things came across, because you got just what I was trying to show. :)

sixthbrightest December 13 2011, 13:45:14 UTC

So adorable. I want to see more of these two being awesome. I love love love her passion and drive, his confidence and cunning.

katmarajade December 14 2011, 15:01:18 UTC

*grins* I know, right? I started this as one of my holiday drabbles and it kind of got away with me. I definitely could have gone further with it and might have to return to it at some point. These two were so much fun to write! So glad those characteristics came across so well. :)

illariy December 13 2011, 23:00:18 UTC

Very cool and so believable! I love how you can trace Jim's characteristic command style through both of them. Winona is awesome in your story and, though a good ending, I would love to read more of her. :D

katmarajade December 14 2011, 15:04:18 UTC

YAY! I'm so glad it worked-- there was much muttering and out loud pondering and mind changing about how to show enough of Jim's traits in each of them while still making them two individual characters completely separate from him.

This was actually written for my holiday drabbles, so I had 19 friends leave prompts and I wrote a drabble for each. Um, this one kinda got away from me! Not so drabbly. :) I would definitely think about revisiting this one and expanding on this "drabble". Thanks so much for saying so. ♥