Comments | katie_m: The story that wasn't

katie_m

The story that wasn't

Oct 18, 2006 18:48

I never reached the J/D in this, though obviously it was supposed to show up eventually. SG-1, also S4 or S5.

( In Which Not All Intelligent Life Can Be Bipedal )

fic, sg-1 fanfic, stargate sg-1

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janedavitt October 19 2006, 02:07:34 UTC

Oh, such a cool start... even unfinished it's still very cool.

katie_m October 28 2006, 16:13:40 UTC

Thanks! I like it to, but it was clearly not going to be finished in the next, you know, two years, so.

destina October 19 2006, 02:09:50 UTC

Oh, I hope you'll finish this!

"Daniel," Jack said, "that parrot is talking to me."

*dies* Yes, well. I can see how Jack would be unsettled by that. *g* Kekari has quite a distinct voice -- funny, a little indignant, smart, with a very self-contained worldview.

katie_m October 28 2006, 16:21:51 UTC

I'd like to--I love Kekari too. We'll see. Free it of the ficathon and I don't have to wedge in J/D, either, which would be a lot easier.

eve11 October 19 2006, 02:19:26 UTC

Wow. This is my favorite kind of storytelling, that dumps you into a new world and then slowly unfurls all of the parts as you go along. Add to that great characterization for SG-1, and perfect dialogue. You rock!

eve11 October 19 2006, 02:22:06 UTC

PS, it may be unfinished, but I think it actually works very well as it is, too ;)

katie_m October 28 2006, 16:23:48 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I liked Kekari, and her world. They're fun.

teand October 19 2006, 02:25:23 UTC

I also hope that you finish this. It would be very sad for something so good to be orphaned.

katie_m October 28 2006, 16:25:22 UTC

Thanks! We'll see. I kind of know what the shape of the story would be, but it'd be long.

teand October 28 2006, 20:10:53 UTC

Long is good!

cofax7 October 19 2006, 02:27:00 UTC

Oh, I love your world-building. And Kekari, who is far braver than she knows. She's got a marvelous distinctive voice.

katie_m October 28 2006, 16:26:35 UTC

Doesn't she? I really like her, the old version looking back and the young one in the "present" both.

She's wary about the little things, but the big things, no. It occurs to me just now that she and Daniel have some things in common.