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pinkthistles April 16 2011, 13:02:27 UTC
Oh - what a dilemma :(
I don't want to feel sympathy for a killer! Its sad that Lola chooses to ignore the red flags - it always leads to disaster somehow.

Go Bianca!!

It makes me so happy when a new chapter pops up xD

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katee412 April 17 2011, 04:09:58 UTC
Ignoring red flags does always lead to disaster, although it's usually only hindsight that teaches that.

I <3 Bianca :D

And thank you for patiently waiting!

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aledstrange April 16 2011, 15:46:08 UTC
So happy to see an update!!

I just finished catching up with a couple of previous parts too, and you continue amazing me every time. This is such an amazing story. LOVE IT!! <3 <3

Killer or not, I can't avoid to have a soft for Ajay, but can't imagine his relationship with Lola having happy ending either.

Also, I was kind hoping that Bianca and Kent would end up meeting the Curious at some point. There're a lot of possibilities there and can't wait to see where that's going. (Bianca/Pascal Or even Lazlo, and who knows maybe Kent meets that special someone called Nervous who's actually into men, not just experimenting :P ... dunno, just saying! XD)

Marvelous update, katee! <3 <3 <3

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katee412 April 17 2011, 04:16:33 UTC
I know it took me long enough! So thank you for your patience and for your lovely words :D

I still have a soft spot for Ajay too, sometimes I regret making him a killer!

I've been waiting to introduce Bianca and Kent to the Curious for ages, as you say there is such possibility, although I think we're both on the same page :D

Thank you and hopefully the next one will be out much sooner!

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dinoshad2brains April 17 2011, 00:00:50 UTC
Oh geez. This really raised the stakes, not just because I'm afraid Ajay's past will come out, but because it made what Ajay did a lot more real for me. Before this, as someone who doesn't play Veronaville much, I was kind of stubborn about "Oh well, he killed some people. But I like Ajay." But those pictures of the Monty kids really brought it home for me. I don't know what to think anymore. I know he's trying to put that part of his life behind him, but damn it Ajay, why did you have to do it?

...Also in between my strife I noticed that Bianca's dress is really cute. It suits her, a little bookish, but still fun.

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katee412 April 17 2011, 04:27:56 UTC
I know what you mean, I like Ajay too and want happiness for him, but then again, it can't be forgotten what he's done. Should he really be allowed to live a happy life, even living with guilt and nightmares, when he took that away from others? That being said, he's sorry and was in a dark place in his life, and now the truth will hurt others. So as you said, why did you have to do it Ajay!

And I love that dress on Bianca, when I downloaded it I wasn't sure who would actually where it, but it suits her really well. I think I may have to give her one in every colour :D

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chickadeelee April 17 2011, 01:17:47 UTC
Great update! You are so good at really getting into your characters' head and telling a flawless story. Wonderful job!

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katee412 April 17 2011, 04:29:34 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and your very kind words!

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budgie_budgie April 17 2011, 13:03:28 UTC
You are such a good writer! I enjoyed reading it and also; Ajay's restaurant looks cosy! :)

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katee412 April 18 2011, 03:15:19 UTC
Thank you for such a big compliment, and for reading! I had a lot of fun decorating Ajay's restaurant :D

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