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katarik

I heart my boy.

Apr 28, 2007 14:06

Title: On the wings of storm
Summary: Jason knew what he was doing when he agreed.
Author's Notes: Sequel to The lode of her agony, second part of the Arkham Go Boom series.
For geeksicle_kezzy, in apology for traumatizing her with my lack of musical knowledge.
Disclaimer: I do not own any characters described herein; DC has all.
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jason, arkham go boom, my fic

Comments 15

geeksicle_kezzy April 29 2007, 04:22:58 UTC

I've never, ever been so happy to have been traumatized before. *explodes with GLEE all over you* You rock. So. So. Hard.

He's sorry for that, but he's not sorry enough to walk away.

Guuuuh. Perfectly right, perfectly on and he's such a punch to the stomach when he's written like this and I LOVE you for doing it.

I also adore his thought process here, the way he ticks things through, measures them out and it's so Batman, but not. So hard and careful and guhincoherentgestures.

Crowbars hurt, Joker. So do bombs.

<3.

And if Batman wants to track Red Hood down, that's just fine, too. Red Hood will be waiting for him.God. This just . . . so good, bad incoherence, BAD. The shift from Bruce to Batman is like a blow and Jason is just so hard and NOT. Attention-whore mixed in with the recalcitrant, pissed-as-hell-and-armed child just breaks me ( ... )

katarik April 30 2007, 15:53:46 UTC

*mee hee hee*

*plays Queen*

:D :D :D I adore this lovely long feedback SO MUCH.

He *is*, Jason is a gutpunch with possibly brass knuckles. *hearts him*

As far as Jason is concerned, he's not Batman. He's just what Batman *should* be.

YES. Oh, yes, that -- Bruce to Batman *broke* me, and Attention-whore mixed in with the recalcitrant, pissed-as-hell-and-armed child eeeeee, I love your brain, because that's so totally Red Hood.

Jason's explosives are awesome. *pets the Jason + grenades story*

:D :D :D *rolls around in your lovely feedback of awesome*

chameleongirl79 April 29 2007, 04:43:17 UTC

Sequel!

Oh Jay, I swear, sometimes you're the only Bat with a lick of sense ♥

katarik April 30 2007, 15:45:58 UTC

*hides from your icon* JAAAAAAAAAAAY.

*ahahahahaha* And considering it's *Jason*, that's a tad terrifying!

:D

__marcelo April 29 2007, 20:47:23 UTC

If you'll forget to momentary lapse into feedback incoherence: *SWEEET*.

Also, efficient and violent, just as Red Hood should do it. Just as Red Hood *is*.

katarik April 30 2007, 15:46:27 UTC

<-- cackling

Yes. Efficient, violent, and very pretty to watch.

hradzka May 2 2007, 13:19:04 UTC

Nice one. Glad for the point about the civilians; I was thinking about the slightly-less-crazies who burn with the rest, and made a reaction!ficlet for you. I hope that's OK.

+++

She's putting the kids' lunchboxes together when Abigail switches on the television, and she braces herself to yell "no cartoons!" before she realizes there aren't any cartoons, and there won't be for a few days, and that Leroy won't ever go off his meds again and he isn't ever coming home.

She can tell herself it didn't hurt long, he isn't suffering any more, so the worst part isn't knowing Leroy's dead, isn't watching the video footage of Arkham twist on itself and burn as the news stations play it over and over, with visible glee at the ratings bonanza. The worst part comes when she goes to work: the ones who knew make stammered condolences, but after they leave her office she sees them with the others, all of them smiling and relieved.

katarik May 2 2007, 16:10:13 UTC

... You? AWESOME.

Oh, man, yes. Because Jason would be sorry about killing the people who didn't have anything to do with it, but he'd do it *anyway*, and... and that hurts other people just as much as he'd been hurt.

The last sentence. Oh. Ow. Oh, *man*, I -- yes.