I don't normally comment much on fanfics... In fact, I normally see the word 'genderswitch' and run for the hills. I didn't see it at first, and by the time I realized this was genderswitch, I was so hooked on the story, I couldn't stop reading.
This is thought-out and rather well-written. There were a couple of small things that did grab my attention and briefly jolt me out of the story, but they are things that a spell-checker wouldn't catch, so not a big deal overall. Since it was easy to get back into the story, I promptly forgot where they were and precisely what they were.
I am enjoying this, and I look forward to seeing more. In fact, I have bookmarked your journal, and I plan on coming back to see what else you have for me to explore. : )
Thank you so much for commenting and letting me know this. Honestly I tend to run from 'genderswitch', fiction as well. They just tend to be horrible. I'm very excited to hear that you are hooked on this.
I am a firm believer in using my spell and grammar check but it never catches everything. I have chosen not to have a beta for this particular piece simply because I want to have an ease of quick posting, so I expected their to be some errors beyond what I could catch. If you ever find any, please feel free to let me know so that I can fix them. I never mind my errors being pointed out since that is how someone becomes a better writer. I'm glad it was easy enough to get back into the story that you weren't derailed completely.
Fell free to explore at your leisure. There is a helpful little road map located in my side bar that archives all of my fics and lists brief information on all. Enjoy! ^_^
buuuut , must you leave it there again ? -sigh- i was hoping i'd get a biiiit mor info -.- . anywhoo , WILL THERE BE A CONFESSION NEXT TIME ? OwO , i want to know what song its going to be , or what your gonna write for the song .
mmmm I agree! I'd kiss him and ask him to dance for me. Then kiss him some more. Then ask him to sing for me. Then kiss him some more. Then snuggle him while kissing him.... Yep that would be nice.
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This is thought-out and rather well-written. There were a couple of small things that did grab my attention and briefly jolt me out of the story, but they are things that a spell-checker wouldn't catch, so not a big deal overall. Since it was easy to get back into the story, I promptly forgot where they were and precisely what they were.
I am enjoying this, and I look forward to seeing more. In fact, I have bookmarked your journal, and I plan on coming back to see what else you have for me to explore. : )
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I am a firm believer in using my spell and grammar check but it never catches everything. I have chosen not to have a beta for this particular piece simply because I want to have an ease of quick posting, so I expected their to be some errors beyond what I could catch. If you ever find any, please feel free to let me know so that I can fix them. I never mind my errors being pointed out since that is how someone becomes a better writer. I'm glad it was easy enough to get back into the story that you weren't derailed completely.
Fell free to explore at your leisure. There is a helpful little road map located in my side bar that archives all of my fics and lists brief information on all. Enjoy! ^_^
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buuuut , must you leave it there again ? -sigh- i was hoping i'd get a biiiit mor info -.- . anywhoo , WILL THERE BE A CONFESSION NEXT TIME ? OwO , i want to know what song its going to be , or what your gonna write for the song .
UPDATE SOOOOOOON ~
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I will tell you it is not an original song by me. I don't write songs... well at least none that will ever see the light of day... ^_^
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I love the eunhae. Eunhae is wuv. haha.
perhaps would the song kyu sing be "hate you, love you"? haha.
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Nope not that song. ^_^
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Gahh <3 Please do... continue soon *puppy dog eyes*
Btw eunhae <3 <3 <3 hahahaha 36 times XDDDDD
Hmmm speaking of bets... *places bets on Love u more*
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Yeah I figured Donghae with any girl will enjoy kissing her and Eunhyuk could probably be convinced to be kiss any number of times ^_^.
-hands cookie- Shhhh it's our little secret.
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Heck! If I could, I'd kiss Hae 36+ times XDDDDDDDD
T^T nope I'm just completely blind *pouts*
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-pets- It's ok. At least you found it.
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