Rest in Peace: Chapter Seven

Apr 11, 2009 10:06

Wow! Chapter Seven already! Awesome! Sorry this took so long guys... We got a bit preocupided with real life for a while there, but here is your next chapter! I'm dedicating this to kiaarra, kill_coke, and oblivionkeeper my faithful reviews. I always get excited to hear your comments so thanks guys! Have some imaginary chocolate chip cookies on me ( Read more... )

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kiaarra April 11 2009, 19:43:17 UTC
"Could I possibly use any more exclamation marks" You haven't used enough exclamation marks until you get into one's and elevens!!!!!11111oneelevn.

I'm getting excited too! I can't wait to read the next chapter. This chapter was short and sweet, and created a lot more questions, and I want answers *impatient much*

Also, thanks for changing the layout, my eyes appreciate it.

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kat_elric April 11 2009, 22:59:10 UTC
lol. I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter will answer a few of your questions I think... but maybe it will create more! :)

You're welcome!

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kiaarra April 15 2009, 00:29:15 UTC
Creating more questions isn't necessarily a bad thing (except in Psychology and physics). And by the time you post it, hopefully I'll be done exams, and not have to care so much about questions.

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deadlycrescendo April 14 2009, 23:35:37 UTC
Lol, I did that to my mum once in an email, when she told me that I was going to see Wicked for my birthday and she was just like 'wtf is wrong with you? did you just have a seizure on your keyboard?' Exact words, too. I love my mum~

I can't wait for the next chapter, either~! I can't even remember half of what happens... How sad is that?

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oblivionkeeper April 12 2009, 03:40:10 UTC
Well then, who'da thunk that Seifer would actually come right out and admit to what he did. >_O

I rather enjoyed the up-note the chappy ended on... quite nice after the healthy dose of drama. ^__^

Caught a couple spelling erros (there instead of their) but nothing that was too distracting.

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kat_elric April 12 2009, 12:18:21 UTC
A little bit of a light note after drama is a good thing. Especially since we are heading into more drama shortly.

I didn't think he would either, but I guess with Xemnas staring him down he got a little scared. Not that I blame him.

*laughs* I'm not surprised that errors slip by me. I'll have to scold my partner for not catching that one! jk, she is fantastic and catches all my other errors so I'll give her a break.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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oblivionkeeper April 12 2009, 13:26:08 UTC
Hah yeah... I think I'd crack under Xemnas' "you WILL admit what you've done" look. >_O

Woo more drama! Looking forward to it!

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deadlycrescendo April 14 2009, 23:31:28 UTC
Yeah, I agree with Kat's explanation. Anybody would cave when subjected to the Xemnas Stare™...

Peeshaw! We can't just have a drama llama story. That'd be epic cliché and rather boring. It's like opposite of a Mary-Sue story, yo!

Nuuu! I fail! -flails-
I didn't edit this one ten times, this time, so that's probably why. That and it was most likely around one in the morning when I DID edit it~ ^^;
WAIT, WAIT, I JUST CAUGHT AN ERROR OF YOURS! You said 'erro' istead of 'error'! I don't feel so bad anymore. Yet, I still do... ¬3¬

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kill_coke April 13 2009, 18:53:19 UTC
Damn I just cant wait what will happen that night... What will Roxas just watch... AND WHAT CAN'T ANYONE JUST BELIEVE WITHOUT SEEING!?

it gotta be something cool.

thanks so much for posting this. i was waiting like hell.

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kat_elric April 13 2009, 21:36:39 UTC
*giggles* From a writing point of view we hadn't really figured out all the details of it yet. But you'll understand why Axel couldn't just flat out tell him.

I think its cool. lol.

You're very welcome. Hopefully the next one won't take quite as long.

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deadlycrescendo April 14 2009, 23:33:16 UTC
Ha, I know right? I was like 'holy crap in a basket, what's goin' on?!' And then, it was all cool. Let's just say we get some epic plot development~

Yeah, I hope the next update won't take as long, but ya never know... ._.

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anorexic_muffin April 14 2009, 02:32:41 UTC
This is really great. Can't wait for more. :)

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kat_elric April 14 2009, 12:29:25 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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deadlycrescendo April 14 2009, 23:51:18 UTC
Shpahnk yew~ We may or may not update soon. It aaall depends... xDD

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kat_elric April 15 2009, 18:29:40 UTC
*giggles* On me! And how fast I get my butt around to the next chapter!

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kill_coke May 18 2009, 07:39:19 UTC
oh hell

i'm ill, and i didn't go to school today. so, i decided to read all seven chapters.......................

AND GOD I WANT MORE!

i hope you guys are ready with the next chapter soon because i'm fucking dying... that's the reason i check my friends page every day *lol* XDD ♥

but yeah, ONCE AGAIN i have to say that this fanfic is awesome work. you guys should get something much better than just comments as a prize for writing this.

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kat_elric May 18 2009, 14:19:38 UTC
Aww thanks. *blushes* I just got off finals and my partner in crime is going into them. So it might be a bit before her life slows down enough that we can post the next chapter, but it should be soon. I feel bad for making people wait for these things.

Sorry your home sick! Feel better soon!

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