Wow, that is just amazing. I admire your skills in describing those battles, this one feels real and it's easy to imagine all the pain. Especially Yesung's.
I really liked Sooyoung's thinking.
I'd love to know what happened to Geng in the past (or I'm that bad at reading between lines and still didn't notice)
Wookie is my fav here! It's great how you showed his strength.
In overall it's a great chapter and it was worth waiting for! Thanks for writing this!
(OT - do you plan on writing spin off of From the Soul to the Song next? I'm really looking forward to it, the teaser piece about Teuk and Kangin was awesome^^)
Thank you! I was a bit worried about this one and that it wouldn't get across what I thought it needed to.
Some of what happened to Hangeng in the past has been revealed. There was one scene where Hangeng was fairly upset and Heechul helped him to snap out of it. Some of it was revealed there.
(I am actually planning for that to be my next major project as long as all of my muses are on board with that one.)
Thanks for pointing that out, I'll try to find that chapter
(that's great! Since my next major project is already finished and only needs checking before I start posting it I can send my muses to convince yours that it's great idea to jump on board^^ they could use some vacation time^-)
Oh god all the tension >_< kihae... Yewook... Sica .... I know you always have happy endings but but but I still can't help but worry =[ I hope everyone will be okay!!! I don't have much to comment on this chapter except to wait for the ending of the battle and its outcome....
Oh good! As I was writing it I couldn't think of another way to really show what was happening in the battle other then that. I'm really glad that it didn't feel too disjointed.
They are so so cute. I love them. Donghae is working on it, lol.
I added you on Google+! I like the sound of these sneak peeks ^_^
I think this may be the most epic battle you've ever written, which is saying something! I think it works so well because all of the characters are doing something slightly different and unique to them, but every little plot point is tied to the others at the same time, which makes for a super tense and interesting read!
Of course it would be his mate bond that coaxes Zhou mi into action <3 I love getting to see snippets of him and Kyuhyun in this one, it's like nostalgia or Christmas or something like that ^_
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Oh wow thanks. lol. I really wanted to show what everyone was doing and I had hopped that they would tie together neatly. I'm glad they read well for you
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JongKey's relationship irl is adorable!!! Their relationship arc in this fic was one of my favourites even before I started shipping them as much, actually, I just love how complex it is ^_^
Lol I love your muses, I imagine them as mischievous little elves whizzing around your brain xD Very intrigued to see what this comment will turn out to mean!
Ooh I'm not surprised the next one will be focused on them, their relationship is so unique in this verse! Looking forward to it already! And OOOOH SOOYOUNG BACKSTORY SNIPPET! :D
Tragic ending? ajsdajksdhkj NO. (what am I talking about, it'd be the best tragic ending ever... but but but D:)
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He is. He has become quite the little warrior.
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I really liked Sooyoung's thinking.
I'd love to know what happened to Geng in the past (or I'm that bad at reading between lines and still didn't notice)
Wookie is my fav here! It's great how you showed his strength.
In overall it's a great chapter and it was worth waiting for! Thanks for writing this!
(OT - do you plan on writing spin off of From the Soul to the Song next? I'm really looking forward to it, the teaser piece about Teuk and Kangin was awesome^^)
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Some of what happened to Hangeng in the past has been revealed. There was one scene where Hangeng was fairly upset and Heechul helped him to snap out of it. Some of it was revealed there.
(I am actually planning for that to be my next major project as long as all of my muses are on board with that one.)
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Thanks for pointing that out, I'll try to find that chapter
(that's great! Since my next major project is already finished and only needs checking before I start posting it I can send my muses to convince yours that it's great idea to jump on board^^ they could use some vacation time^-)
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I know you always have happy endings but but but I still can't help but worry =[ I hope everyone will be okay!!!
I don't have much to comment on this chapter except to wait for the ending of the battle and its outcome....
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I do like my happy endings, don't worry too much.
That's ok. The end should come in the next chapter...
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Yewook and Kihae were so precious^^ Ryeowook is a BAMF as usual, and it's pleasantly surprising for Donghae to be slightly less of a coward XD
Please please please update soon! Although I'm a little sad to know that this is ending soon T.T
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They are so so cute. I love them. Donghae is working on it, lol.
I'll certainly try!
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I think this may be the most epic battle you've ever written, which is saying something! I think it works so well because all of the characters are doing something slightly different and unique to them, but every little plot point is tied to the others at the same time, which makes for a super tense and interesting read!
Of course it would be his mate bond that coaxes Zhou mi into action <3 I love getting to see snippets of him and Kyuhyun in this one, it's like nostalgia or Christmas or something like that ^_ ( ... )
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Lol I love your muses, I imagine them as mischievous little elves whizzing around your brain xD Very intrigued to see what this comment will turn out to mean!
Ooh I'm not surprised the next one will be focused on them, their relationship is so unique in this verse! Looking forward to it already! And OOOOH SOOYOUNG BACKSTORY SNIPPET! :D
Tragic ending? ajsdajksdhkj NO. (what am I talking about, it'd be the best tragic ending ever... but but but D:)
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