[FIC] Beneath the Surface: The Encounter.

Mar 16, 2008 01:16

Title: Beneath the Surface: The Encounter
Genre: AU/Fantasy, Romance/Fluff, Drama
Chapters: 1/6
Characters: ReitaxRuki
Author: Moi (kasumikinss)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I own no one.
Synopsis: One day, while Reita spends some time alone at the ocean, someone unexpected shows up...
Comments: Okay. You guys are gonna think this is ( Read more... )

chapter 1, beneath the surface, kasumikinss, reitaxruki

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abyss_of_rosses March 16 2008, 16:41:07 UTC
Gah Squeel!! Nyan~ At first I didn't see the Reita's POV and I so totally though Rei was the merman! And I was like O__o!? LOL!

Anyways. . . . really nice. For real! You win a. . . Cyber brownie! -gives you cyber brownie-

You should write something like for a sequel; like aquamarine, or little mermaid, or make something up!!

But me wants moar!!

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kasumikinss March 16 2008, 23:38:49 UTC
XD Reita = Merman = No-no. Unless I was aiming for a crack fic or something.

C: A cyber brownie. Sweet~ <3

Hah, I was thinking of slightly basing it off The Little Mermaid before. xD; But we'll see what I can do~

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abyss_of_rosses March 17 2008, 15:47:45 UTC
This is totally unecessary but while I was reading it again an idea came to me. I dunno if you care or so but kya~

Something like Mer-Ruki makes a trade with his father/mother and he can go out into the earth but everytime he touches water his tail comes back and it wont go away until it dries out *___* XDD My crack mind is too bad for my own sake.

Just wanted to tell you -adds to mems-

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kasumikinss March 18 2008, 01:30:25 UTC
XD That's actually a pretty neat idea. I think I'll use it, but it'll be changed around a bit. And I'll credit, of course~ (:

But, y'know, you'll just be further ruining their chances of happily being with one another~ :] But it's fine, it's cool...

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ningen_enpi March 16 2008, 19:10:22 UTC
Yay!
I love your fanfics!
Mainly "Tokyo Shinjuu" * that you should update soon!*
I just realize Ruki was a merman in the end of the fic xD
* idiot *
It MUST have a continuation ò-o
Love it!

;**

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kasumikinss March 16 2008, 23:44:53 UTC
n.n Aww, well don't I feel loved~
I really should update on that, though. xD; I'm surprised anyone still wants to read it to be honest.

XD Wow, the very end.
Well I think it should have a continuation. :] But you already see how Tokyo Shinjuu's ending up~

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shizuka_no_yume March 16 2008, 21:06:10 UTC
Sweet ~ ♥
And this was truly something new! ^^

I really like the way you write. :3

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kasumikinss March 17 2008, 00:04:08 UTC
Aw, don't make me blush~ n.n

Pffft, your writing's way better. xD But thank you~ <3

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shizuka_no_yume March 21 2008, 21:33:10 UTC
no wai! o.o
I'm such a fan of your writing xD ♥

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walkin_siesta March 17 2008, 00:58:00 UTC
nawww dude, you stole my mermaid!ru =_=
xD

seriously, i've been plotting a mermaid ruki fic for MONTHS and just got someone to write it for me just 2 days ago...and then bam, here it is, another mermaid ru fic

*kicks*
xDDDD

it's good ^^ and for a moment there i really thought you gonna write some fishy smex xDDDDD

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kasumikinss March 18 2008, 01:12:29 UTC
o_o; Dude, that's kinda creepy. Get out of my head.

XD Thank you, though. And I probably would've if I could've~ ;)

Now I really wanna read your fic, too. x) HURRY~

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heinne March 17 2008, 01:54:17 UTC
This is amazing!! <3333
I loved the thought of a wet, fishy Ru~~ x3!

Sequel please? xD!

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kasumikinss March 18 2008, 01:16:13 UTC
XD So did I, so did I...
And thank you~!

Oh, you kids and your sequels... (: I suppose I could attempt.

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heinne March 18 2008, 01:26:37 UTC
You are amazing! <3333

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kasumikinss March 18 2008, 01:32:48 UTC
Aw, you're too kind~ n.n

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