~BSG: Trinity

[kastari]

Title:  Trinity
Author:  kastari 
Summary:  She doesn’t remember the last time they made love.
Characters:  Adama/Roslin
Rating:  T
Word Count:  200
Author’s Note:  Written for the 3rd ar_drabbles  challenge.  Prompt:  Body parts--elbow. 
Disclaimer:  I’m just playing in Universal’s sandbox.

Comments

[twilight_sad]

beautifully-tragically captures the melancholy of it all - *sighs and wants chocolate and a happy ending*

[kastari]

Melancholy is one of my favorite words...

The real tragedy is that there isn't a happy ending.

Not really.

Yes, chocolate & wine might ease our pain.

[dradiscontact]

I haven't actually cried at a fic of any sorts in a long, long time. But this... beautiful as it was, it hit a little too close to home.

[kastari]

Deep feelings, deep love. Thank you so very much for reading. It hits close to home for me, too.

[mascaret]

He wishes he could ease her pain. Not even the morpha does that anymore.

She longs for peace, but doesn’t tell him.
*whimper*

She hasn’t left his bed for days. He remembers a time that’s all he wanted-her in his bed for days. He never imagined this.

*sigh*

These lines hit like a (well written) sucker punch.

[kastari]

You chose some of my favorite lines.

(whimpering & sighing with you)

Well written sucker punches--oh yes, they can bring you to your knees...

[lacklusterfic]

“I do,” he tells her, gently kissing the wetness away. “Just now.”

Oh, Gods, what a beautiful ending. The whole thing is beautiful, of course, but right here, where just touching is as meaningful as making love... that gave me a little shiver.

[kastari]

Your comment captures it all.

*shiver*

[longlivelaura]

Very sweet and tender. I love it.

[kastari]

I think Bill & Laura need more sweet & tender moments between them.

Makes me happy that you love the drabble.