Comments | kassidy62: new Supernatural fiction: Burning Blue (Wincest)

kassidy62

new Supernatural fiction: Burning Blue (Wincest)

Feb 02, 2011 21:41

wordcount 6,545 - R rated
written for the Sam focused h/c fiction challenge at ohsam for the prompt:

( Sam can't feel anything... )

spn, fanfiction, writing, wincest

Comments 26

Burning Blue mdlaw February 4 2011, 02:34:29 UTC

That was a spot on RoboSam. Very nice m :)

Re: Burning Blue kassidy62 February 4 2011, 16:49:40 UTC

Your icon is very catching:)
RoboSam is hard to write and keep relatable, I think. thanks!

locknkey February 4 2011, 06:17:01 UTC

I liked how this came together, nice bit of case fic and a little romance. i liked that Sam was the one that convinced Dean not to give up, even if he doesn't have a soul. :)

kassidy62 February 4 2011, 16:51:57 UTC

Glad you liked the story, and esp. what you said about Sam - it was important to try and give RoboSam a little depth.

meesasometimes February 4 2011, 13:46:58 UTC

Really great. I liked the interactions between characters alot.
Between you and me, I hope the hell this story gets Gambled!!!

kassidy62 February 4 2011, 16:52:52 UTC

I was trying to figure out a way to get RoboSam and Dean to have some meaningful interaction, so I'm glad you liked it.

killabeez February 4 2011, 14:20:49 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you mentioned this. I'd missed it. Wonderful writing, here -- I love the balance you hit between tenderness and caring and hurt. This whole story rings incredibly true to me. I love the way you approach the hurt/comfort, too. It is, but it's so restrained and true to the characters.

kassidy62 February 4 2011, 16:57:34 UTC

I know you're not doing the fandom thing with SPN much lately, but I'd been wondering if this story conveyed at all what I'd hoped, or if I'd missed the boat entirely. Your comment made me feel that maybe I did get it somewhere in the vicinity, so thanks muchly!

lolabobs February 4 2011, 16:41:58 UTC

“What’s left of me, Dean? Can you see?”

I ilke this; a tiny bit of uncertainty in souless Sam -

and I love the way it brings Dean back into the moment, even as it hurts him.

kassidy62 February 4 2011, 17:02:28 UTC

I've noticed that the more I watch SPN and read the fiction, the more I become a confirmed Dean/Sam OTP person, and that anytime I write them the most interesting thing for me is their interactions. Thanks for reading!
Oh by the way - I LOVED that tingly bits poll of yours. I'd never have thought about asking if other people got that "special feeling," hahaha.