A Kind of Revolution

[karmasoup]

Elemental Treasure

That Queen Bitch labled him a Pirate.  He who served the king with honor, who scoured the known continents and braved the unknown to assuage her petty and salacious appetites.  He who gave his dying breath to safeguard the people of this land, a land that never accepted him within its folds, that which banished him to the sea.

Comments

[jem0000000]

I like this character. Very strong. :)

[karmasoup]

Thanks! I do have a propensity for tough as nails rough and tumble women who aren't afraid to grab life by the balls, and don't let anyone stand in their way of doing it.

[jem0000000]

You're welcome.

[minnesattva]

I love the voice here, it seems beautifully rhythmic and yet hardly contrived or anything like that. Artistic yet real, a balance that's harder to strike than many people think it is.

I love your writing.

[karmasoup]

Thanks! You're so sweet. I haven't used this voice from another time before, and thought it might be fun. I enjoyed the experience of writing with it. Thanks for reading!

[basric]

Vivid imagery, well told. I enjoyed.

[karmasoup]

Thanks! I love intersections... they always let me explore new territories. Glad you enjoyed this one, and thanks for reading!

[java_fiend]

Very nicely done. Your voice is strong and powerful.. a very "I don't take crap" kinda character! Fun story.

[karmasoup]

I should hope she wouldn't... she is the baddest pirate in that part of the world, striking fear into the hearts of all who only hear her name... you definitely don't come by that reputation by putting up with BS! ;) I don't think I've said so earlier, btw, but, I giggle every time I see that icon of yours. Glad you liked the story... thanks for reading!

[ashgaelsonaria]

You capture the intensity of rage and revenge with every word written.
Lets this story be warning to any who would cross you.