Fic: Winnowing (1/1)

[karenscribbles]

Title: Winnowing
Author: karenor
Character/Pairing: Ten II/Rose
Rating: Hard R for smut and smutty concepts.
Summary: She tries desperately to separate the two of them, while he tries to convince her that he is the same man.
Disclaimer: BBC owns all. Including my soul. I'd like it back one day, please. Maybe.
Beta: requialexa went way above the call of duty for

Comments

[justlook3]

She pressed on, “You’ve only one heart now, Doctor. And maybe I’m needy, but I need all of it. He left us; he doesn’t deserve your pity.”

Thank you!! Amen! (Sorry, got carried away). Loved it, different way of looking at things and loved the make up sex.

[karenor]

Thank you!! Amen!

I feel sad for both Doctors, and my sympathy for Ten is a lot greater now than it was, but every once in a while, I want to bat him over the head and go WHY! So i figure Rose might still be kinda angry at him.

Thanks for the comments, glad you liked the story and its naughty bits. ;)

[justlook3]

I think it's because as Sarah Jane pointed out, he doesn't *need* to be alone, there are so many people that love him. And then it's like need to strangle. And I could totally see Rose's point of view in this (and who wants your lover to look at you with guilt in his eyes anyway?).

[aroniwen]

I really enjoyed this (apart from the ovbious reasons ;) becuase of the real emotion that you put into it. The hurt and smothering guilt and confusion that comes along with their relationship but also just the anger, it felt almost carthetic the way they let it out. It occurs to me that we never really saw Ten and Rose angry at each other in the series. But this felt very real and very them

Thank you.

[karenor]

Wow, thanks so much. Real is always one of the best compliments. :)

It occurs to me that we never really saw Ten and Rose angry at each other in the series.

*thinks* Rarely at the same time. You know, I'd just rewatched Father's Day... and obviously, Nine, but same Doctor and all... where you can really see the love they share, right in the middle of fighting.

The hurt and smothering guilt and confusion that comes along with their relationship but also just the anger, it felt almost carthetic the way they let it out.

Yup, it's not going to be simple for these guys for a long time, but nothing's going to work out if they don't let it out somehow. Glad that all came across.

Thanks again!

[wiggiemomsi]

Oooh; me too ... what you said!

*Hugs*

[karenor]

Thanks!

[karenor]

Bed sex, car sex, what's next, eh?

Hee. You should have seen the first draft of this. ;)

As for moar... not planning on it at the moment, but I may just revisit this universe. :)

Thank you for the comments!

[zotlot]

That was really good! I liked the characterization and the way that this time it wasn't just Rose who was unable to let go of Proper Doctor. The smut helped ;)

[karenor]

I liked the characterization and the way that this time it wasn't just Rose who was unable to let go of Proper Doctor.

Thank you. I often feel like his feelings are overlooked... since he probably got the best end of the deal, doesn't mean it's all perfect and easy for him.

The smut helped

Smut always helps! ;)

Thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed it.

[karenor]

the Doctor's guilt and Rose's fears

They're pretty much a bottomless pit to explore. I can't even make up my mind on my personal canon of how they're feeling on their own in Pete's World.

Also, thumbs up on the smut.

Thank you! That's always nice to hear. :)