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MMOM Day 1-"Mr. Lonely" Life On Mars Wordcount-340 Rating: R

May 01, 2010 07:46

Title: Mr. Lonely
Fandom: Life On Mars
Character: Sam Tyler
Rating; R
Wordcount: 340
Notes: Icon prompt from travels_in_time. Thanks to daasgrrl and hllangel for beta. Takes place early in the first series. Comments and concrit welcome.
Warnings: Test Card Girl
Summary: How Sam copes.

( Away from home, through no wish of my own. )

mmom, sam tyler, mmom 2010, drabble, life on mars

Comments 24

timbershiver May 3 2010, 14:38:02 UTC

awesome, I absolutely love how dark this is. Masturbation with depth? Only here!

karaokegal May 3 2010, 17:51:08 UTC

Thanks, sweetie! I think MMOM generally proves how much depth you can find in a wank!fic.

unfeathered May 9 2010, 21:19:21 UTC

Oh, that's good. Absolutely perfect, and I love the idea of the monitors jumping about while he wanks! *g*

Also love this: the lock on the door appeared to be as flimsy as his own sanity and he never knew when he’d be caught out. So true. :-)

(And yes, I know it's the wrong JS character in my icon. I don't have a Sam icon yet!)

karaokegal May 10 2010, 17:14:52 UTC

JS is welcome in all his incarnations.

Thank you so much. Even though it stays in the opening, I feel the "have I gone mad" theme sort of fades out after the Tony Crane episode, but it was clearly Sam's main fear in the early days and I like to play with that a little.

travels_in_time May 9 2010, 23:43:34 UTC

Sorry it took me a while to catch up with this! Freaky, with the Test Card Girl imagery, but really, that kid was Not Right and she probably would enjoy teasing him about it. I like that at this point, Sam's not sure whether the TCG or Gene is worse. And I like that he's deliberately not thinking about whoever he's thinking about...if that makes sense.

karaokegal May 10 2010, 17:17:24 UTC

Thanks so much for the prompt. It was very inspirational, although maybe not what you were expecting. I warned for TCG because I figure some people might be squicked by the idea of a "child" seeing Sam masturbate, but honestly, she is totally the scariest thing in the whole series and whatever she represents is NOT innocence.

I'm glad you picked up on the point of Sam not thinking about who he's thinking about. I definitely wanted to make that point. Oh SAM!!!