Comments | karaokegal: MMOM Day 1-"Mr. Lonely" Life On Mars Wordcount-340 Rating: R

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MMOM Day 1-"Mr. Lonely" Life On Mars Wordcount-340 Rating: R

May 01, 2010 07:46

Title: Mr. Lonely
Fandom: Life On Mars
Character: Sam Tyler
Rating; R
Wordcount: 340
Notes: Icon prompt from travels_in_time. Thanks to daasgrrl and hllangel for beta. Takes place early in the first series. Comments and concrit welcome.
Warnings: Test Card Girl
Summary: How Sam copes.

( Away from home, through no wish of my own. )

mmom, sam tyler, mmom 2010, drabble, life on mars

Comments 24

severinne May 2 2010, 02:22:39 UTC

Still kinda agog at the idea of you doing MMOM in the first place, but on the upside it gets me twisted Sam-wanking. This was really nicely creepy. :)

karaokegal May 2 2010, 02:56:08 UTC

Three years and counting, I had to do it again. I'm glad you liked this. Once I had the icon prompt, I just ran with it.

chamekke May 3 2010, 04:17:12 UTC

Beautifully creepy, sad, hot and disturbing.

Also very enjoyable. (Yes, I am twisted.)

karaokegal May 3 2010, 17:47:37 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I feel so bad for early series Sam, and I could really see this happening.

fantasy_bubbles May 3 2010, 09:21:25 UTC

I've never read such a dark wank fic before.
*applause*

karaokegal May 3 2010, 17:48:27 UTC

*bows*

Thank you so much. I try to gauge the wank!fic to the tone of the source-material, but I do tend to lean toward the angsty side.

dorsetgirl May 3 2010, 09:40:20 UTC

That's dark and brilliant; you've done a fantastic job of showing how totally unsure Sam is about what's happening. I think this line is just wonderful:

If he was truly insane, he didn’t want to be the lunatic playing with himself in the corner of his cell while the doctors nodded and took notes.

In my happy little Gene/Sam world, it's sometimes too easy to forget just how lost and frightened Sam was at the beginning. Thanks for the reminder.

(Oh, that's weird - in the film my kids are watching, someone just said "Gene? Where's Gene?" Really made me jump!)

karaokegal May 3 2010, 17:49:55 UTC

Coincidence? (I think not.)

Thanks so much for the comment. I really tend to focus on early days Sam for some reason, and I'm the one who has to be reminded of much more comfortable and maybe even "happy" he became with his surroundings, in order for the finale to make sense.

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karaokegal May 3 2010, 17:50:31 UTC

Thank you so much. I saw the icon prompt and all I could think of was how lost and loney Sam is in the beginning.