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Fic: "Smiling"

Jun 05, 2009 23:50

Written as a drabble request for
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fanfiction: complete, fanfiction: oneshot, oc, timeline: animated, perceptor, fanfiction: angst, fanfiction: drama, user: spark_kisses

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FOR MEEEE joules_burn June 7 2009, 16:43:19 UTC

Oh, you. ALKSJDFLKJASDFKASDJ IS MADE FOR ME WITH SQUEALYCEPTOR GETTING ON HIS SCIENCE BOTCH UPS ( ... )

Re: FOR MEEEE spark_kisses June 7 2009, 17:24:55 UTC

Is a beta, oshi-

I... I wanted to enjoy this, but I enjoyed the whole concept more than whatever coherent execution I could think up. ._.

I did try to keep the medic's perspective as vague as possible... I think I was attempting to keep the medic vague so that they didn't block the view on Perceptor. The impact of the fic suffered for it though. XP

The dismissal at the end was meant to imply multiple things. ;D

There could have been a lot more I did with this, yeah. But you're right. I'm glad it's over. >_> ON TO CRACKFIC. That I'm not sure I can write. Yaaay.

Re: FOR MEEEE joules_burn June 7 2009, 18:19:29 UTC

That's because it's easy to go 'I BET PERCEPTOR DELETED HIS EMOTIONS BECAUSE HE COULDN'T STOP HAPPY SQUEALING AT THE BEAKERS ALL THE TIME ( ... )

Re: FOR MEEEE amidoh June 8 2009, 11:05:25 UTC

The tension was so great it was nearly tangible, nearly a solid substance in the air. Prime was glad that none of his warriors were around to see this - he would never live it down. Their faith in him would be shattered, their questions as to why the Matrix would choose someone like him...

Prime ran his fingers once more over the ridged grey that made up the grip, not quite metal but not quite rubber. Could he do this? Even if there was the slightest chance it would end the war...?

Cerulean optics dimmed and narrowed. If Prime had a mouth, he would have grimaced then. There was no choice; it had to be done. He could almost hear Megatron lauding over him, silently celebrating his psychological victory over the Autobot leader.

Finally, Prime held the long-barreled pistol down and moved his body over it. With a groan, he lowered his hips, feeling humiliation spread as the tip of Megatron's silencer penetrated his anal port....

YOU FUCKING ASKED FOR IT.

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