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Naruto Fic: "Pick Me Up" (PG-13) - Naruto/Sasuke

Sep 10, 2008 12:40

Title: "Pick Me Up"

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rating: pg-13, fandom: naruto, pairing: naruto/sasuke, characters: naruto, characters: sasuke, genre: slash

Comments 27

honzeldafitz September 10 2008, 23:00:04 UTC

~ “Come on, I want to finally get myself some booty tonight.”

Sasuke’s left eye twitched, but he didn’t fight Naruto’s insistent tugs. “Don’t you dare,” he threatened.

“Arr!”

ROFLMAO ~ OMG! I don't know why, but that last part killed me. Of course, It was worth it ~ all in the name of ass-piracy. XDDD

alstarryn September 10 2008, 23:00:05 UTC

Holy catfish. That was GREAT. The pick up lines and the dobe and...ass-piracy! Where did that come from?! I'm still having problems breathing!

pervert_bitch September 10 2008, 23:17:27 UTC

ROFL! Oh god, my belly hurts. Your fault!!!

demondreams September 10 2008, 23:49:43 UTC

"Naruto didn’t particularly like math, but he could figure out that one plus two plus three plus four equaled Sasuke’s tongue in his mouth right now."
"It turned out to be a great night for ass-piracy, after all, "

best lines ever. Not only are the pick up lines but the come-backs you came up with! I like how Sasuke was enjoying making Naruto laugh. and then his failed attempts at picking Naruto up, priceless
cord-chan ::runs to mem::

animeartistjo September 11 2008, 00:18:25 UTC

So... Uh... Did they ever find the reason why people spook at this place?

Funny and hot, you do all too well!