LOL, this was AWESOME. I CRACKED UP, especially at Sasuke's comebacks. Aside from that, though, I loved: Naruto didn’t particularly like math, but he could figure out that one plus two plus three plus four equaled Sasuke’s tongue in his mouth right now.
/The man waggled his tongue obscenely and then announced loudly enough that half the bar could hear it, “I be a Love Pirate, and I’m here for your booty! Arr!” Sasuke blinked, gaped, and took a frightened step back. Naruto started to laugh.
“Just…no,” Sasuke finally gasped out, sounding far too traumatized to come up with any kind of reasonable retort./
XDDD "Just..no" LOL! omg Sasukeee this one was too scary even for you!hahahaha
Oh, God. It was hilarious. Your story is awesome! I just couldn't stop laughing. I like your writing, and this idea of pick-up lines is really great. Seeing Sasuke having fun just because Naruto had fun was so cute. I really like how you characterized Sasuke in this story. His crush on Naruto and his signals to let him know were adorable. I really, really liked this story! Good job!
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INDEED XD
*chuckles* ass-piracy...ahh, so good...
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Naruto is sooo ignorant of the fact that sasuke wants in his pants LOL
And Sasuke! So flustered! :D Me likey~!
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*reads it again*
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/The man waggled his tongue obscenely and then announced loudly enough that half the bar could hear it, “I be a Love Pirate, and I’m here for your booty! Arr!” Sasuke blinked, gaped, and took a frightened step back. Naruto started to laugh.
“Just…no,” Sasuke finally gasped out, sounding far too traumatized to come up with any kind of reasonable retort./
XDDD "Just..no" LOL! omg Sasukeee this one was too scary even for you!hahahaha
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I really, really liked this story! Good job!
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