Eleven and a Half Years Later: Unprecedented

[kanedax]

Title: Eleven and a Half Years Later: Unprecedented
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows & Previous Chapters
Characters/Pairings: Neville/Uriela (OC), Tiberius Ogden, various portraits
Rating: R for language, nudity, and sexual activity and discussion
Word count: 4,307 words
Summary: The headmaster gets his say
Notes: I own Uriela Clavis and these

Comments

[lord_gorthaur]

"“Longbottom, stop arguing with the acrylics,” Ogden sighed."

Too funny! The "discussion forum" in the headmaster's office was just great! Not to mention the no-sex-in-school spell...

Although I do hope they get kids one day...or Neville's gran will become very disappointed in not getting great-grandchildren (if she's still alive that is).

Great work, as always.

[kanedax]

I'm leaving the possibility open. But right now I'm leaning against it, mostly because, well, like they said, it's tough enough to have a kid with one parent working at Hogwarts. Having both parents work there makes it near impossible.

[itsmysunshine]

haven't read it yet! just want to scream : "Nevile's getting married? Not with Luna?". *sobs*

now i'm really going to read :D.

[itsmysunshine]

okay, totally love it! how Ogden is as wise as Dumbledore, I wouldn't know *lol*

anyways, I love your idea about Madam Maxime...haha...and yeah i totally can see Parvati doing Divination for the rest of her life. :D

[kanedax]

Woo! This was my first time describing any of my new professors that aren't Uriela, so I'm glad he came off okay. I'm planning on doing a HUGE introduction at around the 13-year mark, when I have both Victoire and Teddy at Hogwarts, so I can cover the third-year expansion classes (Runes, Divination, etc) as well as the basics.

[so_vianna_says]

Out of all the fanfiction I've read, this series is officially my favorite.

[kanedax]

Thanks!!!

That's an upside about having no life: attention to detail and the ability to write a LOT.

[sophia9847]

I've commented on a few earlier chapters, but I really want to reiterate how much I am enjoying this series. You've managed to create characters who are faithful to canon yet totally believable as post-DH adults. One other thing, and I know this is presumptuous to even ask, but do you do any beta reading or know of a good person/group who I could work with? I've done a lot of fanfic in other genres, but I'm new to HP fanfic, and I'm a bit rusty in general with my fiction writing. I'm working on something I expect to be about a 10-12 parter telling the story of the Dumbledore/Grindelwald relationship--there will be 1 or 2 R-rated chapters but I'm much more interested in the emotions/events that drew those very similar young men together (and eventually apart). If you're curious, feel free to check out my LJ, and I'm really sorry if this came across like a commercial for my fic.In any case, keep up the good work! :-)

[kanedax]

lol Don't worry about it, I don't mind. I plug myself ruthlessly to other people asking "anyone have any good fic about so-and-so?" *waves hand furiously*

Unfortunately, I can't help you out. I don't have my stories beta'ed. I've only worked with a beta once, and that was for a Buffy contest piece. Keep your eyes open for other stories, though, people will often put thanks up to people who did a beta for them, and there are communities out there for people who just LOVE to proofread.

Also, I think it's a great compliment that you think I'm beta'ed, thanks. ;)

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[sophia9847]

there is a site called perfect imagination...it is a harry potter beta site

[mary_v]

Awww! Married!:D That's brilliant! I just hope that they charm their room so that they an have sex. It would be the most ridiculous thing if Hogwarts didn't let a married couple have sex! Lovely work!

And I really can't wait for Harry's guest lecture!!!! (If you do decide to write that in!:P)

Great work!:D

[kanedax]

I think that's going to be one of the details that they discuss with Ogden. They'll probably get one room, maybe one office, and there's going to be a lifting of the Virginity Charm in just that room.

And I am planning on getting Harry's lecture at some point. If not during Teddy's reign, then definitely when James shows.

[mary_v]

James! I really would love for James to be there when he gave a speech... but then again he may be mortified by his dad giving a speech.:P